Comments received on poems by neito
A Fools Journey of Love
Raven333 said:
Really liked your poem, I could identify with it for I am to a victim of loves wrath. loved the rhyme it made it flow great.
July 27th, 2022 19:57
Raven333 said:
Really liked your poem, I could identify with it for I am to a victim of loves wrath. loved the rhyme it made it flow great.
July 27th, 2022 19:57
Gleaming World
L. B. Mek said:
thanks, I did
lol
no seriously, thanks for sharing
a sweet read
July 18th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
thanks, I did
lol
no seriously, thanks for sharing
a sweet read
July 18th, 2022 04:04
Battle Scars
L. B. Mek said:
great, poetic passion!
and a wonderful showcasing
of impassioned, restraint
there\'s nothing, new
about Pain or suffering
we\'re all cursed to experience it
before our time is done..
what makes the distinction
and adds, worth
to our retelling and expression
of that suffering and pain
is imbued, in our capacity
to decipher
what meaning we can
from the lessons we learn
\'now i need to spry
spry , and find someone new
but i need you
but is this right?
it dont matter, its alright
even with my lies, i wonder if anyone can love me despite these scars
this got me wondering, how can i love with these scars?\'
July 7th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
great, poetic passion!
and a wonderful showcasing
of impassioned, restraint
there\'s nothing, new
about Pain or suffering
we\'re all cursed to experience it
before our time is done..
what makes the distinction
and adds, worth
to our retelling and expression
of that suffering and pain
is imbued, in our capacity
to decipher
what meaning we can
from the lessons we learn
\'now i need to spry
spry , and find someone new
but i need you
but is this right?
it dont matter, its alright
even with my lies, i wonder if anyone can love me despite these scars
this got me wondering, how can i love with these scars?\'
July 7th, 2022 03:45
