Comments received on poems by lalalaEulalie
Ode to Babylon
tallisman said:
Though not a particularly religious man, the imagery this conjures and it’s emotive nature thrill me. A lovely poem!
July 23rd, 2022 13:06
tallisman said:
Though not a particularly religious man, the imagery this conjures and it’s emotive nature thrill me. A lovely poem!
July 23rd, 2022 13:06
Ode to Babylon
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderfully penned, and heart-felt poem. Let us hope that our better angels are there, waiting for the moment when they will be heard and heeded.
July 23rd, 2022 12:51
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderfully penned, and heart-felt poem. Let us hope that our better angels are there, waiting for the moment when they will be heard and heeded.
July 23rd, 2022 12:51
Wade in the Water
orchidee said:
Good write Lolly.
Bit scary in modern song - something like - gonna jump in the deep waters, gonna plunge right in....
Maybe the Lord says - you don\'t have to overdo it, don\'t have to go over the top!
July 23rd, 2022 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write Lolly.
Bit scary in modern song - something like - gonna jump in the deep waters, gonna plunge right in....
Maybe the Lord says - you don\'t have to overdo it, don\'t have to go over the top!
July 23rd, 2022 01:41
Virginia\'s Bottle
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic and title are perfect. I love to read poems aloud. For me it gives an added dimension to the whole experience, and in reading your poem it just pops. You\'ve tackled this relationship head on with the seriousness that it deserves, but in flowing rhyme which adds to its impact. I especially love the last 3 lines, just that pinch of irony brings it full circle. Beautifully done!
July 22nd, 2022 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic and title are perfect. I love to read poems aloud. For me it gives an added dimension to the whole experience, and in reading your poem it just pops. You\'ve tackled this relationship head on with the seriousness that it deserves, but in flowing rhyme which adds to its impact. I especially love the last 3 lines, just that pinch of irony brings it full circle. Beautifully done!
July 22nd, 2022 13:20
Love Drunk
siranswerer said:
With words short and sweet.
They describe the feeling of,
Once found, something lost.
July 21st, 2022 05:49
siranswerer said:
With words short and sweet.
They describe the feeling of,
Once found, something lost.
July 21st, 2022 05:49
Love Drunk
L. B. Mek said:
indeed!
(love\'s like a bottle
of your favourite beverage
only, riddled
with imperceptible, holes
as tenderly, as you handle it
if it be fated to fail
there be nothing you can do
to stem, its inevitable
demise...)
a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
indeed!
(love\'s like a bottle
of your favourite beverage
only, riddled
with imperceptible, holes
as tenderly, as you handle it
if it be fated to fail
there be nothing you can do
to stem, its inevitable
demise...)
a great shorty!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 02:07
Virginia\'s Bottle
Paul Bell said:
Wonder if anyone walks straight into a proper relationship without hitting the odd disaster along the way.
July 20th, 2022 09:16
Paul Bell said:
Wonder if anyone walks straight into a proper relationship without hitting the odd disaster along the way.
July 20th, 2022 09:16
Virginia\'s Bottle
L. B. Mek said:
what skill you showcase, dear Poet
\'imagery, intertwined
within metaphors, that themselves
are threaded to a theme, curating
that core spine of your poems
loud, volition!\'
I bow, to you far superior
poetic talent
keep inking, growing - soaring
as long as you\'re enjoying it
i wish you
all the success, you seek!
thank you! for choosing to share
July 19th, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
what skill you showcase, dear Poet
\'imagery, intertwined
within metaphors, that themselves
are threaded to a theme, curating
that core spine of your poems
loud, volition!\'
I bow, to you far superior
poetic talent
keep inking, growing - soaring
as long as you\'re enjoying it
i wish you
all the success, you seek!
thank you! for choosing to share
July 19th, 2022 05:19
Love Knot
MDStone said:
Great expression and flow. I read it, felt it, enjoyed it. Keep on writing!
July 11th, 2022 21:35
MDStone said:
Great expression and flow. I read it, felt it, enjoyed it. Keep on writing!
July 11th, 2022 21:35
