Comments received on poems by madalynsamantha

Bones and Dust
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woahh so you got your sweet revenge dearie, must feel good that he recieved the same hurt he gave you.
You expressed in a sharp, icy way, very poetic. Will he get to read it? Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.

December 29th, 2022 11:58

Bones and Dust
mylifeisamess said:

this hits wayyyyy to close to home. i love it so much though. very descriptive and immersive

November 16th, 2022 18:16

Karma and Time.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Sounds like the common philandering guy who is going back and forth btw women so i can totally understand that you\'re kicking him out. You deserve better. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

September 8th, 2022 14:22

My father’s twin.
L. B. Mek said:

so happy for you!
I laud
how you\'ve woven strength
out of crippling circumstance..
what a hard choice
that must have been..
and what an exemplary
utility of healing
you\'ve showcased our beloved
to be!
(stay Strong!
and thank you for intrusting us
with such intimate, thoughts
dear Poet)

July 22nd, 2022 05:10

Deck of cards.
orchidee said:

Seems superstitious to me. Thankfully, I don\'t believe in superstitions.

July 22nd, 2022 02:20

Cigarettes and Coffee.
L. B. Mek said:

hair, wet
stuck in fingers, lingering in feel
tangled up in my stuttering, lung
hair shampoo
scent, as my addiction in life..
lips, curves - arms
serenity, in a hug..
I too, was deemed
of love, once...\'
your words, got me lost
in my watery eyes;
in these reverie words, I type
so as to stop, memory\'s
live feed, playback...)
a great write!
thank you, dear Poet

July 18th, 2022 04:02

Let’s play a game.
GON said:

damn, seems like you\'ve been through a hell of a time but you\'re using your writing to get through it. i\'m fucking here for it.

July 16th, 2022 20:48

The China doll.
GON said:

the china doll had to break sooner or later. better you to do it than some creep.

July 15th, 2022 16:46

The China doll.
L. B. Mek said:

More Power to you!
Speak you truth, loud and Proud
dear Poet
(they call it \'pretty privilege\' I believe
this days..
you want to know, the really morbid thing..
some, less attractive females
would swap places with you in a blink
because, for them
not being seen, is a crueller fate...
can you imagine, how twisted
our society is
that this isn\'t even an issue, politician\'s
make a pledge on
neither female or male, politicians
do you know, why
its been engraved in our mind\'s
from childhood
aesthetic beauty, is money in the bank
and no one, out of sheer jealousy
and callous indifference
dares talk about, the other side
of that cursed coin...
the objectivation of people
based on their attractiveness
is an issue, entrenched
in all that\'s wrong
with our society as a whole..
is governed by that spectrum
and yet
we\'re told, to simply accept it
if I had more time, i could write
so much more
but I know how rude I\'m being already
in staining you page, with my impotent rant, please
forgive me)

July 15th, 2022 04:03

Slap to the face.
L. B. Mek said:

luckily my first \'true\' love
was a wonderful experience
although ultimately
not meant to be, unfortunately;
so I empathise, for those
who had that first experience of love
be tarnished in their memories forever
for we can never feel love, like we did
that first time..
if you can salvage a few decent mementos
of that relationship
maybe even replace your ex
with your favourite actor or celeb
in the scenes you choose, to keep
and try
to forget all those other, venomous
before they taint
your future experience of love..
(again my 2 cents
again, freely give
for a reason)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

July 15th, 2022 03:00

Slap to the face.
GON said:


July 14th, 2022 22:21

In the next life.
L. B. Mek said:

I like the thought of multiple life\'s
in some we can plant
our deeds, as seeds
and in the rest we can attempt
\'to reap what we sow\'...
but what do i know..
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read

July 14th, 2022 00:37