Comments received on poems by madalynsamantha
Under your spell.
2781 said:
Sounds a bit like the merry go round from hell.
December 14th, 2023 02:45
2781 said:
Sounds a bit like the merry go round from hell.
December 14th, 2023 02:45
Deck of cards.
orchidee said:
Seems superstitious to me. Thankfully, I don\'t believe in superstitions.
July 22nd, 2022 02:20
orchidee said:
Seems superstitious to me. Thankfully, I don\'t believe in superstitions.
July 22nd, 2022 02:20
Cigarettes and Coffee.
L. B. Mek said:
\'yeah,
hair, wet
stuck in fingers, lingering in feel
tangled up in my stuttering, lung
hair shampoo
scent, as my addiction in life..
soft
lips, curves - arms
hips
everything!
serenity, in a hug..
I too, was deemed
worthy
of love, once...\'
(sorry
your words, got me lost
dogpaddling
in my watery eyes;
tangled
in these reverie words, I type
fast
so as to stop, memory\'s
live feed, playback...)
a great write!
thank you, dear Poet
July 18th, 2022 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'yeah,
hair, wet
stuck in fingers, lingering in feel
tangled up in my stuttering, lung
hair shampoo
scent, as my addiction in life..
soft
lips, curves - arms
hips
everything!
serenity, in a hug..
I too, was deemed
worthy
of love, once...\'
(sorry
your words, got me lost
dogpaddling
in my watery eyes;
tangled
in these reverie words, I type
fast
so as to stop, memory\'s
live feed, playback...)
a great write!
thank you, dear Poet
July 18th, 2022 04:02
Let’s play a game.
GON said:
damn, seems like you\'ve been through a hell of a time but you\'re using your writing to get through it. i\'m fucking here for it.
July 16th, 2022 20:48
GON said:
damn, seems like you\'ve been through a hell of a time but you\'re using your writing to get through it. i\'m fucking here for it.
July 16th, 2022 20:48
The China doll.
GON said:
the china doll had to break sooner or later. better you to do it than some creep.
July 15th, 2022 16:46
GON said:
the china doll had to break sooner or later. better you to do it than some creep.
July 15th, 2022 16:46
The China doll.
L. B. Mek said:
More Power to you!
Speak you truth, loud and Proud
dear Poet
(they call it \'pretty privilege\' I believe
this days..
you want to know, the really morbid thing..
some, less attractive females
would swap places with you in a blink
because, for them
not being seen, is a crueller fate...
can you imagine, how twisted
our society is
that this isn\'t even an issue, politician\'s
make a pledge on
neither female or male, politicians
do you know, why
because
its been engraved in our mind\'s
from childhood
aesthetic beauty, is money in the bank
and no one, out of sheer jealousy
and callous indifference
dares talk about, the other side
of that cursed coin...
the objectivation of people
based on their attractiveness
is an issue, entrenched
deep
in all that\'s wrong
with our society as a whole..
everything
is governed by that spectrum
and yet
we\'re told, to simply accept it
...
if I had more time, i could write
so much more
but I know how rude I\'m being already
in staining you page, with my impotent rant, please
forgive me)
July 15th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
More Power to you!
Speak you truth, loud and Proud
dear Poet
(they call it \'pretty privilege\' I believe
this days..
you want to know, the really morbid thing..
some, less attractive females
would swap places with you in a blink
because, for them
not being seen, is a crueller fate...
can you imagine, how twisted
our society is
that this isn\'t even an issue, politician\'s
make a pledge on
neither female or male, politicians
do you know, why
because
its been engraved in our mind\'s
from childhood
aesthetic beauty, is money in the bank
and no one, out of sheer jealousy
and callous indifference
dares talk about, the other side
of that cursed coin...
the objectivation of people
based on their attractiveness
is an issue, entrenched
deep
in all that\'s wrong
with our society as a whole..
everything
is governed by that spectrum
and yet
we\'re told, to simply accept it
...
if I had more time, i could write
so much more
but I know how rude I\'m being already
in staining you page, with my impotent rant, please
forgive me)
July 15th, 2022 04:03
In the next life.
L. B. Mek said:
I like the thought of multiple life\'s
in some we can plant
our deeds, as seeds
and in the rest we can attempt
\'to reap what we sow\'...
lol
but what do i know..
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read
July 14th, 2022 00:37
L. B. Mek said:
I like the thought of multiple life\'s
in some we can plant
our deeds, as seeds
and in the rest we can attempt
\'to reap what we sow\'...
lol
but what do i know..
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read
July 14th, 2022 00:37
