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L. B. Mek said:

they say words, can\'t break bones
but here
a lifetime\'s worth of trauma
and guts, abused
by that person\'s own fingers...
yeah, sure
\'words can\'t hurt\', right?!
(such a cruel world
the older, supposedly \'wiser\' minds
labelling, younger
more insecure generations
as \'flakes\'
or weaklings, because
apparently, \'bullying, is a part of life\'
we have to accept
and being belittled, is inevitable
didn\'t you know
it\'s all done for you, to make you
\'stronger\'
for having gone through it..
and yet
for every, Brave and Inspirational
story
like yours, dear Poet
how many
never make it?
get stuck in that whirlpool of demise
to never, again
feel sunshine, or another\'s eyes
upon them
without feeling
like they\'re being cooked, alive...
just, such a fck\'d up world!)
I laud your bravery
and champion, your message
stay Strong! dear Poet
hope you all, blossom
into a wiser generations
than we, who failed - pathetically
like all those before us

July 18th, 2022 03:17