Comments received on poems by Jack Otterberg
Like a Stallion in a Standing Heart
arqios said:
At times sleeping it over does wonders and at other times that stallion runs wild in the expanse of our being. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:56
arqios said:
At times sleeping it over does wonders and at other times that stallion runs wild in the expanse of our being. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:56
The Calm State of Chaos
arqios said:
Porcelain eyes are like unseeing glazed-ness. That can come about when there is no understanding to be had for the grasping that we inevitably do while attempting to make sense of what surrounds us and intrigues our thinking. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:54
arqios said:
Porcelain eyes are like unseeing glazed-ness. That can come about when there is no understanding to be had for the grasping that we inevitably do while attempting to make sense of what surrounds us and intrigues our thinking. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:54
Suicidal Raccoons
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
how about i offer you, this
pitiful promise
while you willingly, choose to share
your poetic genius, with the world
and
I still have control over my breath
I\'ll read
every work of yours, I come across
like
it\'s the very first;
hoping
that with each poem, your passionate
ink, births into reality
those raccoon\'s, distracting
your monkey-mind\'s, bleak
musings
will, be tempered and contented
to wait
by the side of the road
till the right, ride
comes along!
(feeble, it may be
but its all i have to offer
forgive me)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
how about i offer you, this
pitiful promise
while you willingly, choose to share
your poetic genius, with the world
and
I still have control over my breath
I\'ll read
every work of yours, I come across
like
it\'s the very first;
hoping
that with each poem, your passionate
ink, births into reality
those raccoon\'s, distracting
your monkey-mind\'s, bleak
musings
will, be tempered and contented
to wait
by the side of the road
till the right, ride
comes along!
(feeble, it may be
but its all i have to offer
forgive me)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:34
The Calm State of Chaos
L. B. Mek said:
\'I let cigarettes press their feet
across my teeth.\'
(trodden-on, never
felt so vivid, in a read)
Great imagery throughout
a fantastic write and so relatable
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 18th, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'I let cigarettes press their feet
across my teeth.\'
(trodden-on, never
felt so vivid, in a read)
Great imagery throughout
a fantastic write and so relatable
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 18th, 2022 03:46
