Suicidal Raccoons

Jack Otterberg

evenings don’t expire in July

the long, branching arm of heat

stretches the sky

like a poem read by strings of stars

before sadness departs

and Elkhorn’s an absence of air

I hear porch lights talk among themselves

about the Lutheran Church up by West Dodge

the natural consequence of lodging

in silence so poisonous

it can’t expire

the raccoons didn’t even like the quiet heat

they were suicidal, splattered off I-80

a long, branching sun

a long, branching poem unread by still paws

I’m only met by sizzling quietude

a poem too crude

to operate its own vehicle

when stars are strings in paper skies

and earth hides from me

I don’t know why earth hides from me

where did I go? why am I gone to earth?

did I not go to church enough?

was the heat too lonely to love me?

I’m far, God- I’m a distant speck

on your right eye’s radar

don’t leave me with the raccoons

don’t leave while I have so much

to give up on

  • Author: Jack Otterberg (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 21st, 2022 20:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: Idk
  • Category: Sad
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  • L. B. Mek

    wow!
    how about i offer you, this
    pitiful promise
    while you willingly, choose to share
    your poetic genius, with the world
    and
    I still have control over my breath
    I'll read
    every work of yours, I come across
    like
    it's the very first;
    hoping
    that with each poem, your passionate
    ink, births into reality
    those raccoon's, distracting
    your monkey-mind's, bleak
    musings
    will, be tempered and contented
    to wait
    by the side of the road
    till the right, ride
    comes along!
    (feeble, it may be
    but its all i have to offer
    forgive me)
    thanks for sharing, dear Poet



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