Comments received on poems by Shruti64



Where are you god?
L. B. Mek said:

\'faith be a hard thing to hold on, to
in the face
of so much strife and hurt, in life
lucky, be those stubborn few
who find a grip, tight enough
to still, believe...\'
a relatable and succinctly earnest question
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(remember
if one avenue for hope and belief
shrinks from your horizons, view
then
find yourself, something or someone
new
to anchor your hope within
rinse and repeat
as many times as it takes
for You: to Survive!)
stay Strong!

August 11th, 2022 02:01

A MEMORY IN THE MIRROR
L. B. Mek said:

your poetry needs no explanation
if people don\'t understand, that\'s their problem
your writing is worded
in a very accessible and relatable way..
a lovely read, almost magical
thanks for sharing

August 9th, 2022 03:09