Comments received on poems by A.L.H
And
Poetic Licence said:
This is a nicely put together write, and I love the ending, leaving it open to be anything could happen, enjoyed the read
June 20th, 2025 17:09
Poetic Licence said:
This is a nicely put together write, and I love the ending, leaving it open to be anything could happen, enjoyed the read
June 20th, 2025 17:09
And
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the undetermined ending of the poem. A haunting poem that seems a conscience personified.
June 20th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the undetermined ending of the poem. A haunting poem that seems a conscience personified.
June 20th, 2025 14:04
Here
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write on the reversing of feelings from hopelessness to hope, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 16:27
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write on the reversing of feelings from hopelessness to hope, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 16:27
Here
sorenbarrett said:
From hopeless to hopeful this poem turns the table and reverses the feeling nicely worded
June 17th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
From hopeless to hopeful this poem turns the table and reverses the feeling nicely worded
June 17th, 2025 15:57
Always
jarcher54 said:
Same old story, told with breathtaking restraint and elegance. Emotional but serene, like a deep river.
August 20th, 2024 13:58
jarcher54 said:
Same old story, told with breathtaking restraint and elegance. Emotional but serene, like a deep river.
August 20th, 2024 13:58
Just breathe
orchidee said:
Good write A.
Now - so I say - I did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well after it! lol.
March 30th, 2024 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write A.
Now - so I say - I did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I did it, but didn\'t feel well after it! lol.
March 30th, 2024 03:23
Mirror morgue
peto said:
Great write
From the haunting 1st line to the slab at the end
Rhyme and rhythm spot on also
Thoroughly enjoyed
March 6th, 2024 18:07
peto said:
Great write
From the haunting 1st line to the slab at the end
Rhyme and rhythm spot on also
Thoroughly enjoyed
March 6th, 2024 18:07
The longing
David Wakeling said:
I this a shopping list? I\'d like to buy some of these items.The window that wants and the screams that pacific.I liked the rhyme but there are words missing
August 2nd, 2023 17:28
David Wakeling said:
I this a shopping list? I\'d like to buy some of these items.The window that wants and the screams that pacific.I liked the rhyme but there are words missing
August 2nd, 2023 17:28
The longing
peto said:
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme here
Longing to read more
Very Much enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 16:35
peto said:
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme here
Longing to read more
Very Much enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 16:35
Happy 50th dad!
L. B. Mek said:
you are very lucky to have such a connection with your dad
but these words, exemplify
how much you deserve that luck
a loving child, is testimony
to a loving parent\'s, toil
of sleepless nights, sweat and tears...
(congrats to both you and your dad
\'many happy returns!\')
thanks for sharing
August 22nd, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
you are very lucky to have such a connection with your dad
but these words, exemplify
how much you deserve that luck
a loving child, is testimony
to a loving parent\'s, toil
of sleepless nights, sweat and tears...
(congrats to both you and your dad
\'many happy returns!\')
thanks for sharing
August 22nd, 2022 03:24
Happy 50th dad!
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Very happy belated bday!!! A beautiful written poem about the love between father and daughter!🍀
August 21st, 2022 20:46
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Very happy belated bday!!! A beautiful written poem about the love between father and daughter!🍀
August 21st, 2022 20:46
Blink
L. B. Mek said:
(may she rest in peace
and I\'m so sorry for your loss
I hope these words, help
in some way
set you free, from that endless
pain
even if for those brief minutes
your tears are running
from line to line..)
this is a most beautiful dedication
and the impassioned love
you\'ve imbued in every syllable
makes believe, she\'s smiling
bright
wherever she now dwells..
thank you! for choosing to share
it\'s been a humbling privilege
to read these words, dear Poet
stay Strong!
August 19th, 2022 02:59
L. B. Mek said:
(may she rest in peace
and I\'m so sorry for your loss
I hope these words, help
in some way
set you free, from that endless
pain
even if for those brief minutes
your tears are running
from line to line..)
this is a most beautiful dedication
and the impassioned love
you\'ve imbued in every syllable
makes believe, she\'s smiling
bright
wherever she now dwells..
thank you! for choosing to share
it\'s been a humbling privilege
to read these words, dear Poet
stay Strong!
August 19th, 2022 02:59
Campfire talks
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful ambition for love
you have, dear poet
I hope fate is kind and offers you
an opportunity to realise your dreams..
thanks for sharing
August 18th, 2022 00:18
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful ambition for love
you have, dear poet
I hope fate is kind and offers you
an opportunity to realise your dreams..
thanks for sharing
August 18th, 2022 00:18
Depression
tallisman said:
Aha! An Acrostic poem! Well done, it works as well! Thanks for sharing!
August 17th, 2022 00:54
tallisman said:
Aha! An Acrostic poem! Well done, it works as well! Thanks for sharing!
August 17th, 2022 00:54
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