Comments received on poems by Kayla Mcdonald



Alone and Thinking
L. B. Mek said:

\'I get you grew up in a house with parents who weren\'t very affectionate, but why did you have to become your parents\'..
because, most of us
are destined to become, what we strive
to avoid the most
as inside, we carry those scars
that warp, our choices in life!
see
you say, that those around you
don\'t see you
and that\'s probably true
but I ask, do you
\'See\', those around you
can you?
I really like your honest and sincere bravery
in sharing, such an intimate write
and I, genuinely
hope you find that, jolt
of inspiration in your life
to reverse your depression
and find some semblance of peace..
but I urge you to think
if you
coming from a supportive, community
can find yourself suffering, so unfairly
what of those, who\'s had it much worse...
(a powerful write!
thanks for sharing)

August 15th, 2022 03:18

Alone and Thinking
Paul Bell said:

Think you summed up life perfectly.
When it\'s good, it\'s good. When it\'s bad, it\'s terrible. This is when the real you has to come out of hiding. Tough times just mean you may have to change course. Good times will come back, and so will you.

August 14th, 2022 14:39