Comments received on poems by MaybeOneDay



Defeat
Bella Shepard said:

Reading aloud it is lilting with a lovely rhyming pattern. While the poem evokes sadness, it also has a gentle quality that I love. Well penned dear friend.

September 8th, 2022 16:07

My Darkest Friend
Bella Shepard said:

You have expressed quite eloquently the despair of loneliness, a melancholy that does touch all of us at times. Well written!

September 1st, 2022 08:31

My Darkest Friend
Adriana said:

I liked this one. SImple but transmits the feeling of loneliness everyone feels in a way that makes us realize it is important to feel lonely sometimes.

September 1st, 2022 03:48