Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope
Doggerel Dave said:

Five repeats...clever or what? I gave you what i consider to be very useful advice.

Do not expect any further commentary from me.

September 26th, 2022 21:32

Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope
ccpegus said:

Thank you..I wrote this completely heart broken and it\'s based purely on emotions and I\'ll edit it as soon as I get more objectivity

September 26th, 2022 20:49

Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope
ccpegus said:

Thank you..I wrote this completely heart broken and it\'s based purely on emotions and I\'ll edit it as soon as I get more objectivity

September 26th, 2022 20:49

Wasting time around the Red Velvet Rope
Doggerel Dave said:

Let\'s hope persistence pays better than the subject of your piece....... But repeat entry? Takes time to get noticed here (if that\'s what you\'re after)
Story of unrequited love and a great rhymer, which always sits well with me (the rhymer bit I mean).
I hope you stay around. And if you do, it would make others happy if you read and commented on their work, in addition to providing a variety of yours....

September 26th, 2022 20:07