Comments received on poems by bambi_
Not a poem
L. B. Mek said:
even if you do, it matters little
if you can get to a stage, where
she doesn\'t invade, your mind
I relate
to your resolve, in not deceiving yourself
thanks for sharing
July 17th, 2023 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
even if you do, it matters little
if you can get to a stage, where
she doesn\'t invade, your mind
I relate
to your resolve, in not deceiving yourself
thanks for sharing
July 17th, 2023 05:21
Fallen Too Deep
L. B. Mek said:
with empowering writes like this, you can
know thy self, to be worthy
liberate thy self by inking your truth
life has a way of rewarding
those who choose to fight, to hope
for that better, promised
in each dawning of a new gifted day..
(thanks for sharing, stay strong)
June 23rd, 2023 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
with empowering writes like this, you can
know thy self, to be worthy
liberate thy self by inking your truth
life has a way of rewarding
those who choose to fight, to hope
for that better, promised
in each dawning of a new gifted day..
(thanks for sharing, stay strong)
June 23rd, 2023 03:57
Fallen Too Deep
peto said:
Definitely
Keep writing it out
I agree with previous comment re \"tattooed tears\" line
Will come in waves at times and hit like a train
Use your obvious talent for writing
Respect
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
peto said:
Definitely
Keep writing it out
I agree with previous comment re \"tattooed tears\" line
Will come in waves at times and hit like a train
Use your obvious talent for writing
Respect
June 23rd, 2023 03:39
Fallen Too Deep
jarcher54 said:
Please recover dear Bambi! I wish to hear more from you... I was moved by the image of tattooed tears...
June 23rd, 2023 00:16
jarcher54 said:
Please recover dear Bambi! I wish to hear more from you... I was moved by the image of tattooed tears...
June 23rd, 2023 00:16
