Comments received on poems by bam



Give me more.
sorenbarrett said:

Sensuous, erotic, sexual an expression of desire all wrapped into one short poem. Nicely said

March 31st, 2025 04:28

Give me more.
Poetic Licence said:

Only time will tell, enjoyed the read

March 31st, 2025 02:33

Don\'t go
Poetic Licence said:

A few words that say so much, nicely written

March 28th, 2025 20:36

Don\'t go
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 28th, 2025 15:22

Don\'t go
sorenbarrett said:

A plea of love said in few words but still powerful

March 28th, 2025 14:22

Flashbacks
L. B. Mek said:

even if you do, it matters little
if you can get to a stage, where
she doesn\'t invade, your mind
I relate
to your resolve, in not deceiving yourself
thanks for sharing

July 17th, 2023 05:21

Fallen Too Deep
L. B. Mek said:

with empowering writes like this, you can
know thy self, to be worthy
liberate thy self by inking your truth
life has a way of rewarding
those who choose to fight, to hope
for that better, promised
in each dawning of a new gifted day..
(thanks for sharing, stay strong)

June 23rd, 2023 03:57

Fallen Too Deep
peto said:

Definitely

Keep writing it out
I agree with previous comment re \"tattooed tears\" line
Will come in waves at times and hit like a train
Use your obvious talent for writing
Respect

June 23rd, 2023 03:39

Fallen Too Deep
jarcher54 said:

Please recover dear Bambi! I wish to hear more from you... I was moved by the image of tattooed tears...

June 23rd, 2023 00:16