Comments received on poems by Trieste
Seeing Red
L. B. Mek said:
tis wisdom, distilled accessible
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
tis wisdom, distilled accessible
thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 06:13
This Owl
L. B. Mek said:
Tis good, whatever you want to call it
thanks for sharing
December 5th, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
Tis good, whatever you want to call it
thanks for sharing
December 5th, 2022 04:34
Omni-directional Sun
L. B. Mek said:
\'and all we can do is be\'
Amen!
(Haunting imagery
these words resonate with me
as-if
we view the worlds while underwater
with our clothes dry and untouched
looking around us, at the sheer vastness
of it all
directionless, we simply dogpaddle
waiting for that next wave to carry us along
as \'all we can do is be\'
and survive to glimpse those shorelines in our fates)
thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 31st, 2022 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'and all we can do is be\'
Amen!
(Haunting imagery
these words resonate with me
as-if
we view the worlds while underwater
with our clothes dry and untouched
looking around us, at the sheer vastness
of it all
directionless, we simply dogpaddle
waiting for that next wave to carry us along
as \'all we can do is be\'
and survive to glimpse those shorelines in our fates)
thanks for sharing dear Poet
October 31st, 2022 07:04
Drifting Star
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I think it is beautiful and very visual verse.
October 11th, 2022 17:49
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I think it is beautiful and very visual verse.
October 11th, 2022 17:49