Solitude\'s Serenity
AuburnScribbler said:

Bravo for this poem heartbones20, the smooth rhythm of it tells me, that you truly like your own space, to which I do too, for there\'s too much noise in the modern day, so a much needed \"me time\" is very much warranted.

Masterfully written, thank you for sharing, and I hope that all is well!

June 2nd, 2023 05:19

Solitude\'s Serenity
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(I read and learn, dear Poet
and bow to your superior talent
please forgive my feeble attempt
at a poetic reply, thank you!
for inspiring me
this, a most treasured gift)
\'flight\'s within poetic might
reading solace
as fatalistic, refrain\'s of hope
a dream shared
devoid of proximity\'s grace
or comfort,
I too, drink deep from humility
alone
yet adorned by that wondrous
feel
of connectedness, in Spinoza\'s
oneness
a legacy of yearning to unveil
my life\'s
legacy of worth and meaning
inking
futile words as my QEWRTY
defiance
assuming, in each facsimile
of a poem
I may yet conquer, this hollowness
defining
my life\'s most soothing, serenity
a sanctity
of aloneness, amongst Nature\'s
abundance...!\'

March 24th, 2023 07:20

What do I owe you?
Eileen Clark said:

Hello, this is a great piece of work. I\'m not sure but I feel it might have been written through a lot of pain, maybe not, either way it\'s really good.

February 15th, 2023 14:31