Comments received on poems by jinsflyingshoes



If i had the money...
L. B. Mek said:

a fun read, thanks for sharing
(money doesn\'t necessarily yield charity
humility does!
the key is building yourself wings out of green cash
while keeping your toes, embedded in humanity\'s suffering earth
building
your own private james webb telescope
to glean, those broken hearts in the world
you walk past, everyday
that\'s the distance between wealth, power
and genuine charity...
at least to me)
that\'s that superpower, no one
makes mytholgical or comic, hero\'s out of


November 7th, 2022 06:44

If i had the money...
Doggerel Dave said:

If you could only stop feeling up all the strays and homeless, I think I could quite see your point of view...🙂

November 7th, 2022 03:49

I tried
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

It is very sad and very visual.

November 1st, 2022 18:21

I tried
jinsflyingshoes said:

I just came up with this at 2 in the morning haha

November 1st, 2022 01:10