Comments received on poems by drniran
EAR
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains a most interesting answer response pattern and seems to be speaking to oneself. Nicely written it provokes reflection
November 26th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains a most interesting answer response pattern and seems to be speaking to oneself. Nicely written it provokes reflection
November 26th, 2025 04:58
WITH YOU OR AWAY
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult situation either way best to stay away. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult situation either way best to stay away. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 20:37
SUNDAY
sorenbarrett said:
Poem in a monorhyme is not always easy to do, especially when it grows in length and the choices without repetition grow fewer. Well done
November 14th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Poem in a monorhyme is not always easy to do, especially when it grows in length and the choices without repetition grow fewer. Well done
November 14th, 2025 04:17
SARCASTIC
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and rhymed this poem follows from first to last. Well done
November 12th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and rhymed this poem follows from first to last. Well done
November 12th, 2025 12:12
AM
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that works its way unconventionally out of a jam. Fun read
November 9th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that works its way unconventionally out of a jam. Fun read
November 9th, 2025 08:07
HARSH REALITY
sorenbarrett said:
A depiction so vivid the metaphor is forgotten. A lovely write
November 7th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A depiction so vivid the metaphor is forgotten. A lovely write
November 7th, 2025 05:50
ADVANCEMENT
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that has an uplifting ending. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that has an uplifting ending. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 08:26
JOURNEY
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that wishes to redo some things from the past. A poem of regret?
November 5th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that wishes to redo some things from the past. A poem of regret?
November 5th, 2025 03:51
The DAY
sorenbarrett said:
A most curious wording of this poem as the days progress it returns to Date me. If dated one measures time marking the hour of conception. Dating on the other hand could be going out with someone but I find this hard to apply. Mind provoking.
November 3rd, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most curious wording of this poem as the days progress it returns to Date me. If dated one measures time marking the hour of conception. Dating on the other hand could be going out with someone but I find this hard to apply. Mind provoking.
November 3rd, 2025 09:38
AND
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of not being heard seem to flow from this poem of frustration. Raw and well spoken
November 3rd, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of not being heard seem to flow from this poem of frustration. Raw and well spoken
November 3rd, 2025 03:53
DECISION
sorenbarrett said:
Sad poem feelings of loss and question asked as to why the narrator is the villain
November 1st, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Sad poem feelings of loss and question asked as to why the narrator is the villain
November 1st, 2025 13:37
Five 4 Three
sorenbarrett said:
Wise advice that reminds me of what we were taught in kindergarten about crossing the street still remains good advice in approaching any new circumstance. Good read
October 31st, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Wise advice that reminds me of what we were taught in kindergarten about crossing the street still remains good advice in approaching any new circumstance. Good read
October 31st, 2025 03:45
RAGPICKER
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty and raw a feeling of being alone and unwanted. Displaced with no home. A sense of sadness and isolation fills this piece
October 28th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Gritty and raw a feeling of being alone and unwanted. Displaced with no home. A sense of sadness and isolation fills this piece
October 28th, 2025 05:29
LIFE & DEATH
sorenbarrett said:
A interesting read that makes me think that we all play parts and there is not much that separates the movie reel and what is real.
October 27th, 2025 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A interesting read that makes me think that we all play parts and there is not much that separates the movie reel and what is real.
October 27th, 2025 14:06
CONFUSED OR FUSED
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative this poem plays on words and spelling to make a message in rhyme most compelling. A fun play on words cleverly ablating a few letters to give meaning. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative this poem plays on words and spelling to make a message in rhyme most compelling. A fun play on words cleverly ablating a few letters to give meaning. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 05:35
IP man
sorenbarrett said:
I love the initiation of each line with single nouns denoting action then followed up on so naturally in the completion of the line. Very creative and nicely done.
October 24th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
I love the initiation of each line with single nouns denoting action then followed up on so naturally in the completion of the line. Very creative and nicely done.
October 24th, 2025 11:22
DOUBTS
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this work is that we need to take the initiative and act not just sit back. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this work is that we need to take the initiative and act not just sit back. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 08:50
HOME ALONE
sorenbarrett said:
Surrealistic in images and words this poem proceeds to the end. Well done
October 21st, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Surrealistic in images and words this poem proceeds to the end. Well done
October 21st, 2025 13:08
ONE
sorenbarrett said:
Advice given with each following line being the advice. You got me on clove though.
October 12th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Advice given with each following line being the advice. You got me on clove though.
October 12th, 2025 04:20
SUICIDE
mvvenkataraman said:
I love deeply poems with rhyme,
It is a thrill to watch how all rhyme,
I am enthralled by your rhyme-scheme,
Thanks to believe in rhyming wisely!
December 9th, 2022 10:25
mvvenkataraman said:
I love deeply poems with rhyme,
It is a thrill to watch how all rhyme,
I am enthralled by your rhyme-scheme,
Thanks to believe in rhyming wisely!
December 9th, 2022 10:25
TEAR
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"It was your presence which completed me in everything\"
words are incredible. they can portray so much utilizing so little. thank you for these words.
November 28th, 2022 10:50
Kinsey Peterson said:
\"It was your presence which completed me in everything\"
words are incredible. they can portray so much utilizing so little. thank you for these words.
November 28th, 2022 10:50
Hovering
L. B. Mek said:
when reading, I chuckle
at the thought that those who think
our planet is flat
must assume
these same birds your poetry, serenades
are flying to one end
turning right back, migrating
from one flat edge to the other...
lol
(sorry for my silly thoughts
thanks for sharing such an intriguing read)
November 7th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
when reading, I chuckle
at the thought that those who think
our planet is flat
must assume
these same birds your poetry, serenades
are flying to one end
turning right back, migrating
from one flat edge to the other...
lol
(sorry for my silly thoughts
thanks for sharing such an intriguing read)
November 7th, 2022 05:45
