Comments received on poems by drniran



SUICIDE
mvvenkataraman said:

I love deeply poems with rhyme,
It is a thrill to watch how all rhyme,
I am enthralled by your rhyme-scheme,
Thanks to believe in rhyming wisely!

December 9th, 2022 10:25

TEAR
Kinsey Peterson said:

\"It was your presence which completed me in everything\"

words are incredible. they can portray so much utilizing so little. thank you for these words.

November 28th, 2022 10:50

Hovering
L. B. Mek said:

when reading, I chuckle
at the thought that those who think
our planet is flat
must assume
these same birds your poetry, serenades
are flying to one end
turning right back, migrating
from one flat edge to the other...
lol
(sorry for my silly thoughts
thanks for sharing such an intriguing read)

November 7th, 2022 05:45