Comments received on poems by moonhoney
cage
PurpleGlasses said:
But in her mind
In her soul
A spark is left
With the mightiest of glow
She just has to find it
It\'ll surge with fire
All of her sorrow
Will just make the flame go higher
The cage thats binds her
She tears it down
Obliterates her demons
Retaking her crown.
May 26th, 2023 16:41
PurpleGlasses said:
But in her mind
In her soul
A spark is left
With the mightiest of glow
She just has to find it
It\'ll surge with fire
All of her sorrow
Will just make the flame go higher
The cage thats binds her
She tears it down
Obliterates her demons
Retaking her crown.
May 26th, 2023 16:41
Human
lauridini said:
Very well written! Yes, making mistakes hurts and often you only focus on having made them, while the most important thing is how you deal with and what you learn from them
January 9th, 2023 15:12
lauridini said:
Very well written! Yes, making mistakes hurts and often you only focus on having made them, while the most important thing is how you deal with and what you learn from them
January 9th, 2023 15:12
