Comments received on poems by Dr. Dark
The truth behind my smile
mvvenkataraman said:
Each time when I loved a woman,
I imagined like this with true glee,
But, when they abruptly left
By totally demolishing my views,
I had no other go, but to forget,
Getting a woman of this type
Indeed is an extraordinary boon,
Best wishes to the poet with prayers!
May 23rd, 2023 03:56
mvvenkataraman said:
Each time when I loved a woman,
I imagined like this with true glee,
But, when they abruptly left
By totally demolishing my views,
I had no other go, but to forget,
Getting a woman of this type
Indeed is an extraordinary boon,
Best wishes to the poet with prayers!
May 23rd, 2023 03:56
The truth behind my smile
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem is indeed superb,
But, is the poet talking about the Sun?
But, the Sun comes under masculine gender,
Anyhow, if it is a woman, all the best!
March 31st, 2023 08:45
mvvenkataraman said:
The poem is indeed superb,
But, is the poet talking about the Sun?
But, the Sun comes under masculine gender,
Anyhow, if it is a woman, all the best!
March 31st, 2023 08:45
wonder
Jane Frye said:
Oh, there will always be days like this; when your feet hit the floor before your eyes even open. Makes me nervous just reading this. Nice piece.
January 20th, 2023 18:15
Jane Frye said:
Oh, there will always be days like this; when your feet hit the floor before your eyes even open. Makes me nervous just reading this. Nice piece.
January 20th, 2023 18:15
Lies
L. B. Mek said:
lonely, maybe
but not alone, dear poet
it\'s just, that the voices of the few
that choose to walk a life of awareness
are masked (literally) and drowned out
by the majority, who have long chosen
distractions and false deities
as their escape from bleak reality..
in Bukowski\'s words, Beware:
\'the Genius of the crowd\'
(thanks for sharing, a wonderful read)
January 13th, 2023 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
lonely, maybe
but not alone, dear poet
it\'s just, that the voices of the few
that choose to walk a life of awareness
are masked (literally) and drowned out
by the majority, who have long chosen
distractions and false deities
as their escape from bleak reality..
in Bukowski\'s words, Beware:
\'the Genius of the crowd\'
(thanks for sharing, a wonderful read)
January 13th, 2023 06:31
