Comments received on poems by cyriac maliakkal
Detectable and Shimmering
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have no word for braiding
their love.\'
wonderfully creative with your imagery
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have no word for braiding
their love.\'
wonderfully creative with your imagery
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:29
Piercing
Bobby O said:
I love the style but I kinda list the message. Props on the phrasing though.
June 9th, 2023 19:36
Bobby O said:
I love the style but I kinda list the message. Props on the phrasing though.
June 9th, 2023 19:36
Exacerbated
Bobby O said:
It’s more a political statement than it is a poem. The challenge is to try for both. It seems you only concerned yourself with the statement and didn’t work at it hard enough to shape the poem Like this stanza is just lazy if you mention no weapons give an example To just say that war is hate and controversy without evidence or example is writing without insight
The war for justice with no weapons.
Even the protection of law.
But here is the war of hate,debate and
Controversy.
May 31st, 2023 03:07
Bobby O said:
It’s more a political statement than it is a poem. The challenge is to try for both. It seems you only concerned yourself with the statement and didn’t work at it hard enough to shape the poem Like this stanza is just lazy if you mention no weapons give an example To just say that war is hate and controversy without evidence or example is writing without insight
The war for justice with no weapons.
Even the protection of law.
But here is the war of hate,debate and
Controversy.
May 31st, 2023 03:07
Silhouette
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely title, and
your detailed words
mirror
that detailed painting
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely title, and
your detailed words
mirror
that detailed painting
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:34
Trajectory
cyriac maliakkal said:
Grey hair in India it means the man who came to old and he is affraid that his life is going to death.
April 18th, 2023 07:33
cyriac maliakkal said:
Grey hair in India it means the man who came to old and he is affraid that his life is going to death.
April 18th, 2023 07:33
Trajectory
David Wakeling said:
I tried reading this but it just consists of statements that are not explained.Something about grey hairs??
April 17th, 2023 16:48
David Wakeling said:
I tried reading this but it just consists of statements that are not explained.Something about grey hairs??
April 17th, 2023 16:48
Poignant
L. B. Mek said:
\'I had been laundered by the time:
No atmosphere of faithfulness.\'
great lines, thanks for sharing
(sadly, our circumstances
have a way of drawing limitations
upon life\'s trajectories
yet still, surpassing our limitations
is what life\'s all about...)
we need but try, that\'s all
stay strong!
March 17th, 2023 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'I had been laundered by the time:
No atmosphere of faithfulness.\'
great lines, thanks for sharing
(sadly, our circumstances
have a way of drawing limitations
upon life\'s trajectories
yet still, surpassing our limitations
is what life\'s all about...)
we need but try, that\'s all
stay strong!
March 17th, 2023 06:06
