Comments received on poems by cyriac maliakkal
Raving for Anthophile
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a metaphor in different types of love and ambition. Finding one does not mean neglecting the other and we all try to keep all that we enjoy even when one is opposed to the other. Nicely written
August 21st, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a metaphor in different types of love and ambition. Finding one does not mean neglecting the other and we all try to keep all that we enjoy even when one is opposed to the other. Nicely written
August 21st, 2026 04:06
The sunken mettles
sorenbarrett said:
Names given in this cryptic write of actions enacted. Well done
August 19th, 2026 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Names given in this cryptic write of actions enacted. Well done
August 19th, 2026 13:55
The quiet smile during the virtuous time
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of urgency in this work and a feel of time passing in a surreal manner. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of urgency in this work and a feel of time passing in a surreal manner. Nicely done
August 15th, 2026 14:01
Elusive gaze
sorenbarrett said:
Vizards or masks with a sound so close to Wizard that uses incantations and here a poem full of alliteration. It cries out for magical incantation. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Vizards or masks with a sound so close to Wizard that uses incantations and here a poem full of alliteration. It cries out for magical incantation. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:12
Cadence of buzzing epoch
sorenbarrett said:
Mangled meaning in surreal sentences broken bits of poetic punctuation. A piece that requires much meditation. Nice
August 2nd, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Mangled meaning in surreal sentences broken bits of poetic punctuation. A piece that requires much meditation. Nice
August 2nd, 2026 09:17
Detectable and Shimmering
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have no word for braiding
their love.\'
wonderfully creative with your imagery
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have no word for braiding
their love.\'
wonderfully creative with your imagery
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:29
Piercing
Bobby O said:
I love the style but I kinda list the message. Props on the phrasing though.
June 9th, 2023 19:36
Bobby O said:
I love the style but I kinda list the message. Props on the phrasing though.
June 9th, 2023 19:36
Exacerbated
Bobby O said:
It’s more a political statement than it is a poem. The challenge is to try for both. It seems you only concerned yourself with the statement and didn’t work at it hard enough to shape the poem Like this stanza is just lazy if you mention no weapons give an example To just say that war is hate and controversy without evidence or example is writing without insight
The war for justice with no weapons.
Even the protection of law.
But here is the war of hate,debate and
Controversy.
May 31st, 2023 03:07
Bobby O said:
It’s more a political statement than it is a poem. The challenge is to try for both. It seems you only concerned yourself with the statement and didn’t work at it hard enough to shape the poem Like this stanza is just lazy if you mention no weapons give an example To just say that war is hate and controversy without evidence or example is writing without insight
The war for justice with no weapons.
Even the protection of law.
But here is the war of hate,debate and
Controversy.
May 31st, 2023 03:07
Silhouette
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely title, and
your detailed words
mirror
that detailed painting
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely title, and
your detailed words
mirror
that detailed painting
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:34
Trajectory
cyriac maliakkal said:
Grey hair in India it means the man who came to old and he is affraid that his life is going to death.
April 18th, 2023 07:33
cyriac maliakkal said:
Grey hair in India it means the man who came to old and he is affraid that his life is going to death.
April 18th, 2023 07:33
Trajectory
David Wakeling said:
I tried reading this but it just consists of statements that are not explained.Something about grey hairs??
April 17th, 2023 16:48
David Wakeling said:
I tried reading this but it just consists of statements that are not explained.Something about grey hairs??
April 17th, 2023 16:48
Poignant
L. B. Mek said:
\'I had been laundered by the time:
No atmosphere of faithfulness.\'
great lines, thanks for sharing
(sadly, our circumstances
have a way of drawing limitations
upon life\'s trajectories
yet still, surpassing our limitations
is what life\'s all about...)
we need but try, that\'s all
stay strong!
March 17th, 2023 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'I had been laundered by the time:
No atmosphere of faithfulness.\'
great lines, thanks for sharing
(sadly, our circumstances
have a way of drawing limitations
upon life\'s trajectories
yet still, surpassing our limitations
is what life\'s all about...)
we need but try, that\'s all
stay strong!
March 17th, 2023 06:06
