Comments received on poems by nae_loveswords



rip me apart
L. B. Mek said:

I related, so I wanted to word
my understanding
in some kind of poetic reply
forgive me
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
(family as curse
friendship as burden
fear as our daily meal
\'were we made for this\'
\'just, this\'
\'to what end\'
\'by what measure
are we deemed to have
capacity, enough
to endure and survive, life\'
\'victory in our witnessed Aurora\'s
yet, a sunrise
lasts for merely blink moments\'
\'while
our tossing turning, nightmares
go-on for hours, days, lifetime\'s\'
\'what fck\'d up scales, does fate
utilise, to think all this adds-up\'
so fck our idiotic circumstances
to hell with loyalty, rewarded
in bruises, too deep to appear
on skin
fck it all
let\'s just do it for ourselves
they hate us anyway
so fck it, laugh at our own
jokes
we\'ll be, their crazy
if we get to be left alone
yeah, who needs friends
or family
we\'re all walking on a grave pit
of destiny, literally
destined to scar the earth
as regurgitated lava..
yeah, fck it
just do it our way
let those wannabe do-gooder\'s
pick up our bills
and so what, we bathe
in a shower of tears, daily
a little salty, admittedly
but it scrubs us clean
of our suffering\'s stains
fck it!)

January 20th, 2023 05:40