Comments received on poems by MJL
Valley of the Blue Moon
jarcher54 said:
This is exhilarating and exhausting. Such a dense tour de force full of spirit and awe. I need to reread it a couple times... after I catch my breath. I love the line \"Mother Luna\'s kaleidoscope of enlightenment.\" Wisdom is kaleidoscopic indeed.
January 27th, 2023 21:35
jarcher54 said:
This is exhilarating and exhausting. Such a dense tour de force full of spirit and awe. I need to reread it a couple times... after I catch my breath. I love the line \"Mother Luna\'s kaleidoscope of enlightenment.\" Wisdom is kaleidoscopic indeed.
January 27th, 2023 21:35
Sun Pond
L. B. Mek said:
\'Somewhere between another dream and lavender bubbles
The contract will begin
Foggy feet shuffle onto the wheel\'
I fear, dear Poet
your greatest obstacle may be
the sheer limitless scale
of your poetic talent
(I humbly bow, before your poetic genius
thank you! for choosing to share
I read and learn)
January 23rd, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'Somewhere between another dream and lavender bubbles
The contract will begin
Foggy feet shuffle onto the wheel\'
I fear, dear Poet
your greatest obstacle may be
the sheer limitless scale
of your poetic talent
(I humbly bow, before your poetic genius
thank you! for choosing to share
I read and learn)
January 23rd, 2023 05:45