Comments received on poems by gqam
Solitude
mvvenkataraman said:
Whenever you are haunted and none is with you,
You are under the grip of loneliness only,
Solitude denotes a positive attitude only,
Solitude is to enjoy, loneliness is to suffer!
February 4th, 2023 06:21
mvvenkataraman said:
Whenever you are haunted and none is with you,
You are under the grip of loneliness only,
Solitude denotes a positive attitude only,
Solitude is to enjoy, loneliness is to suffer!
February 4th, 2023 06:21
Achieving
L. B. Mek said:
\'The end breath of hopelessness, what a creation we make\'
what a powerful line
thanks for sharing, really thought provoking
February 3rd, 2023 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'The end breath of hopelessness, what a creation we make\'
what a powerful line
thanks for sharing, really thought provoking
February 3rd, 2023 05:22
Fear
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 38 years of banking,
I was haunted by cash job, but couldn\'t escape,
You have perfectly described my past mind,
Thanks for making me remember those days,
I am now peacefully retired from service!
February 2nd, 2023 06:47
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 38 years of banking,
I was haunted by cash job, but couldn\'t escape,
You have perfectly described my past mind,
Thanks for making me remember those days,
I am now peacefully retired from service!
February 2nd, 2023 06:47
Misery
Ok Waleed said:
There’s a bunch of we’s and ours in your poem so that’s what I was responding to. And don’t be sensitive I wasn’t trying to be rude solely criticizing
January 31st, 2023 01:18
Ok Waleed said:
There’s a bunch of we’s and ours in your poem so that’s what I was responding to. And don’t be sensitive I wasn’t trying to be rude solely criticizing
January 31st, 2023 01:18
Misery
Ok Waleed said:
Can people be heaven too? You poets man always depressing and one sided. For once how about you go practice Opposite Day.
Sorry I’m too harsh but hey when you speak for all of us I gotta defend myself. Good poem nonetheless
January 31st, 2023 00:10
Ok Waleed said:
Can people be heaven too? You poets man always depressing and one sided. For once how about you go practice Opposite Day.
Sorry I’m too harsh but hey when you speak for all of us I gotta defend myself. Good poem nonetheless
January 31st, 2023 00:10
As I breath time passes by, the misery of our lives
amepiesces said:
life is cruel but we are also made tough.
wishing you comfort and joy..and a great read as well
January 30th, 2023 06:07
amepiesces said:
life is cruel but we are also made tough.
wishing you comfort and joy..and a great read as well
January 30th, 2023 06:07
As I breath time passes by, the misery of our lives
L. B. Mek said:
(I don\'t know dear poet, most of us
are screeching
when taking our first breath
we knew back then
what lay in wait...)
lol
a relatable tone to your wording
thanks for sharing
stay strong! we never know
when better will visit
and change our life\'s narrative
January 30th, 2023 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
(I don\'t know dear poet, most of us
are screeching
when taking our first breath
we knew back then
what lay in wait...)
lol
a relatable tone to your wording
thanks for sharing
stay strong! we never know
when better will visit
and change our life\'s narrative
January 30th, 2023 04:50
Murder
orchidee said:
But you are still here, writing this poem! lol. You is not dead.
January 28th, 2023 03:46
orchidee said:
But you are still here, writing this poem! lol. You is not dead.
January 28th, 2023 03:46
Demon inside me
jarcher54 said:
But you are not alone... I sense you are also a knight in shining armor who can slay the monster. This chilling piece is beautifully, brutally human. You do have a gift for expressing that.
January 28th, 2023 02:29
jarcher54 said:
But you are not alone... I sense you are also a knight in shining armor who can slay the monster. This chilling piece is beautifully, brutally human. You do have a gift for expressing that.
January 28th, 2023 02:29
Murder
jarcher54 said:
Recognizing what you have done is the first step toward our freedom. Young poets like you are so full of new ways of expressing emotions and inner thoughts! It is a thing of awe and hope to an older guy like me.
January 28th, 2023 02:26
jarcher54 said:
Recognizing what you have done is the first step toward our freedom. Young poets like you are so full of new ways of expressing emotions and inner thoughts! It is a thing of awe and hope to an older guy like me.
January 28th, 2023 02:26
Demon inside me
orchidee said:
I should put the blade down, and leave that demon under the bed then.
January 27th, 2023 03:27
orchidee said:
I should put the blade down, and leave that demon under the bed then.
January 27th, 2023 03:27
