Comments received on poems by Olaf Gatermann



Der wahre Schrecken
Olaf Gatermann said:

The real terror

1. To leave
and when you come back
everything has changed.
2. To leave
and when you come back
nothing has changed.

March 17th, 2023 01:52

Märchen
Olaf Gatermann said:

Sorry that the rhyme got lost:

Fairy Tale

Farmer, farmer
let me in,
I can\'t stay outdoors any more.
King, it\'s wet and cold,
and I am lonely, dumb and old.
Frau Holle, open the door for me!
I\'ll give you a mouse in return.
Grey ass, grey ass, listen to me,
I\'m asking what I can ask.
The stone lies deep in the wide sea,
I don\'t know anything anymore
and I\'m crying.


March 13th, 2023 04:32

Als der Schnee geschmolzen war
Norman Flagtea said:

When the snow had melted

When the snow had melted
a dead bird lay in front of my door.
Had he only spoken up,
the stupid animal,
I would have let him in.

February 26th, 2023 17:05

Die Wasserschildkröten
Olaf Gatermann said:

The waterturtles

The waterturtles
take the sun
on a black tree stump
in the lake
of the cemetery.
The dead appreciate that.
In the dusk
they come by for a little while
and sit
on the shore
until the turtles
also disappear.

February 25th, 2023 16:59

Brief an einen jungen Dichter
Norman Flagtea said:

Letter to a young poet

And please consider,
young friend,
that it is a lot easier
to be a tiger
than an armadillo.

February 24th, 2023 06:22

Entdeckung
Olaf Gatermann said:

Realisation

I look like a man
who looks like me.
He is married to my wife.
He shops
where I shop.
But he takes more milk.

February 24th, 2023 05:52

Hände aus Blech
Olaf Gatermann said:

Hands of tin

He was considered autistic
because he recognised people
by their hands.
Some had
hands of tin,
others
hands of teak wood
and still others
had hands of water.

February 21st, 2023 12:14

Oh!
Olaf Gatermann said:

Four young refugees
(male)
are learning German
at computers
in the public library
and are talking
about the German words
for homicide and genocide


February 17th, 2023 15:48

Solange die Erde steht
Jeannie said:

Wish I could translate your words, so that I may read them.

February 11th, 2023 17:28

Kinderspiel
Doggerel Dave said:

Danke.

February 7th, 2023 20:05

Kinderspiel
Doggerel Dave said:

Google attempted to translate that fro Spanish to English... so what are you up to...?
All roads lead toi English any way... so get with th e strength, matey!🙂

February 7th, 2023 04:38

La condition humaine
arqios said:

There is an adult that is but a child.
Genuinely loved your turn of phrase. Hunger is so primal and so basic and the societal collective, if blind to this, is sorely malignant.

January 31st, 2023 20:53

La condition humaine
Ok Waleed said:

Great poem I enjoyed this

January 31st, 2023 10:57

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