Comments received on poems by muhs



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PoeticPraise. said:

(I don’t agree with the concept of playing with love or faking it but I have been there and done that. On both sides of the situation.)

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is so relatable and I can feel the emotion in each line.

This line “ It hurts even more that you’re okay and you’ve done nothing wrong but it\'s just me that’s ruining what could be so right. “ is very beneficial because it adds to the reader being able to get a glimpse of the other person’s potential emotion in this.

Great write. Thanks for sharing.

February 6th, 2023 13:39