Comments received on poems by muhs
Convinced that I do
PoeticPraise. said:
(I don’t agree with the concept of playing with love or faking it but I have been there and done that. On both sides of the situation.)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is so relatable and I can feel the emotion in each line.
This line “ It hurts even more that you’re okay and you’ve done nothing wrong but it\'s just me that’s ruining what could be so right. “ is very beneficial because it adds to the reader being able to get a glimpse of the other person’s potential emotion in this.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
February 6th, 2023 13:39
PoeticPraise. said:
(I don’t agree with the concept of playing with love or faking it but I have been there and done that. On both sides of the situation.)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is so relatable and I can feel the emotion in each line.
This line “ It hurts even more that you’re okay and you’ve done nothing wrong but it\'s just me that’s ruining what could be so right. “ is very beneficial because it adds to the reader being able to get a glimpse of the other person’s potential emotion in this.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
February 6th, 2023 13:39