Comments received on poems by R.J.Stone
Lock Up
L. B. Mek said:
(this is poignant social commentary
aside
a message of hope and camaraderie
I appreciate your usage of repetition
to stress, that caged feel
of covid lockdowns..)
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 20th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
(this is poignant social commentary
aside
a message of hope and camaraderie
I appreciate your usage of repetition
to stress, that caged feel
of covid lockdowns..)
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 20th, 2023 03:40
Lock Up
David Wakeling said:
The poem is repetitive and unclear.It does not stand on its own.No reason is given why we need to lock everything.But hey what would i know
February 19th, 2023 15:43
David Wakeling said:
The poem is repetitive and unclear.It does not stand on its own.No reason is given why we need to lock everything.But hey what would i know
February 19th, 2023 15:43
The not special
Doggerel Dave said:
I like your commentary and agree with it\'s sentiments.
Why not express that in your short punchy poem. Make the message immediately clear....
I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It would be good if you could continue to post, read and respond to other\'s poems and comments.
February 12th, 2023 18:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I like your commentary and agree with it\'s sentiments.
Why not express that in your short punchy poem. Make the message immediately clear....
I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It would be good if you could continue to post, read and respond to other\'s poems and comments.
February 12th, 2023 18:21
