Comments received on poems by Night_Owl
Trapped
Warded Seabee said:
I enjoyed this. I have experienced night terrors often as a child.. \"a menacing presence the terror is paralyzing..\" so true. Sometimes the most horrific night terrors were about what I didn\'t see, gripping me with fear by what I know is near. Good write indeed
April 15th, 2017 14:44
Warded Seabee said:
I enjoyed this. I have experienced night terrors often as a child.. \"a menacing presence the terror is paralyzing..\" so true. Sometimes the most horrific night terrors were about what I didn\'t see, gripping me with fear by what I know is near. Good write indeed
April 15th, 2017 14:44
Self-portrait
Augustus said:
Sound like a terrific person. Now who was it you were describing? Just teasing. Nicely done.
November 20th, 2016 00:21
Augustus said:
Sound like a terrific person. Now who was it you were describing? Just teasing. Nicely done.
November 20th, 2016 00:21
Lost
Augustus said:
I hurts so much to learn the truth about someone we loved. They deserve to be the recipient of the cold icy stare. Hugs.
October 26th, 2016 17:42
Augustus said:
I hurts so much to learn the truth about someone we loved. They deserve to be the recipient of the cold icy stare. Hugs.
October 26th, 2016 17:42
Bottle of Emotions
Augustus said:
It's fine. I like quiet and reserved. Nice read
September 18th, 2016 12:22
Augustus said:
It's fine. I like quiet and reserved. Nice read
September 18th, 2016 12:22
Bottle of Emotions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a very emotional poem NO. Some people are UBER-EMOTIONAL but personally like you I try to control my emotions but sometimes I just laugh (or cry) out loud because the cork has flown out of the bottle ! Thanks ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 18th, 2016 11:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a very emotional poem NO. Some people are UBER-EMOTIONAL but personally like you I try to control my emotions but sometimes I just laugh (or cry) out loud because the cork has flown out of the bottle ! Thanks ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 18th, 2016 11:31
If Only
Augustus said:
Your poem was full of imagery and powerful. No ridicule here, only admiration.
September 11th, 2016 21:28
Augustus said:
Your poem was full of imagery and powerful. No ridicule here, only admiration.
September 11th, 2016 21:28
If Only
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very poignant poem Judy ~ thanks for sharing. I love the structure ~ Rhythmic "free verse" quatrains with a final doublet which sums up the "if only longings" in the poem. "Silent words are spoken ~ through the eyes desolation shouts" ~ awesome ! Yearning ~ singing ~ dancing ~ caressed by the Sun ~ your dog your only faithful companion. Probing ~ opening ~ peering ~ glowing shame ~ praying ~ sadness seeping from tired eyes ! It is all so so sad ~ I'm crying now ! Thanks BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 16:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very poignant poem Judy ~ thanks for sharing. I love the structure ~ Rhythmic "free verse" quatrains with a final doublet which sums up the "if only longings" in the poem. "Silent words are spoken ~ through the eyes desolation shouts" ~ awesome ! Yearning ~ singing ~ dancing ~ caressed by the Sun ~ your dog your only faithful companion. Probing ~ opening ~ peering ~ glowing shame ~ praying ~ sadness seeping from tired eyes ! It is all so so sad ~ I'm crying now ! Thanks BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 16:02
Why
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to being lonely. I wrote a poem, Loneliness that expresses this. I enjoyed reading your poem.
July 29th, 2016 22:03
rrodriguez said:
I can relate to being lonely. I wrote a poem, Loneliness that expresses this. I enjoyed reading your poem.
July 29th, 2016 22:03
Here with You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JUDY - A very interesting poem written from the perspective of a departed loved one writing from Paradise ! As becomes the subject it is an elegantly structured poem - four neat quatrains and a consistent rhyme pattern (xaxa xbab etc). This gives it form and flow. For the loved one it is full of positivity. S1. Place of peace and eternal love S2. Present with you S3. With you in sad times S4. Eyes looking from Heaven. A beautiful poem - Thank you BRIAN
June 8th, 2016 04:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JUDY - A very interesting poem written from the perspective of a departed loved one writing from Paradise ! As becomes the subject it is an elegantly structured poem - four neat quatrains and a consistent rhyme pattern (xaxa xbab etc). This gives it form and flow. For the loved one it is full of positivity. S1. Place of peace and eternal love S2. Present with you S3. With you in sad times S4. Eyes looking from Heaven. A beautiful poem - Thank you BRIAN
June 8th, 2016 04:00
Choices
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooooooooooooh JUDY - such a sad poem - especially the closing line. "That on every occasion - he chooses you." In life and in love we all have choices to make and I have been the rejected one when the Lady had two (or more) choices. So I can emphasise with how you feel ! Even though it is a sad poem it has beautiful structure which adds dignity to the message. I love quatrains with a consistent rhyme patteren (xaxa xbxb etc) This give great rhythm and flow to the poem. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 16:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooooooooooooh JUDY - such a sad poem - especially the closing line. "That on every occasion - he chooses you." In life and in love we all have choices to make and I have been the rejected one when the Lady had two (or more) choices. So I can emphasise with how you feel ! Even though it is a sad poem it has beautiful structure which adds dignity to the message. I love quatrains with a consistent rhyme patteren (xaxa xbxb etc) This give great rhythm and flow to the poem. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 16:19
The Power of Thoughts
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JUDY - A very powerful poem of entrapment in thoughts (we all experience that !) and then a blessed release. We can all be instruments of release - getting through the wall is the problem ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 10th, 2016 02:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JUDY - A very powerful poem of entrapment in thoughts (we all experience that !) and then a blessed release. We can all be instruments of release - getting through the wall is the problem ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 10th, 2016 02:58
