Comments received on poems by winter vale
It bothers me
Doggerel Dave said:
A message with much truth in it.
I make it your fourth poem....so possibly a little late, but I hope you are enjoying your stay here. This is usually stated right at the first piece, but is an interactive site, so feel free to not just read, but comment on other\'s work and respond to comments on your own.
Best wishes.
March 13th, 2023 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
A message with much truth in it.
I make it your fourth poem....so possibly a little late, but I hope you are enjoying your stay here. This is usually stated right at the first piece, but is an interactive site, so feel free to not just read, but comment on other\'s work and respond to comments on your own.
Best wishes.
March 13th, 2023 07:53
Let You Down
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'And now I\'m standing on the edge,
Afraid to take another pledge.
But still, I must apologize for the pain,
And all the times I went insane,
I hope that someday you\'ll forgive,
And find a way for us to live.
For though I stumbled on this road,
Fondness for you will never erode,\'
March 10th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'And now I\'m standing on the edge,
Afraid to take another pledge.
But still, I must apologize for the pain,
And all the times I went insane,
I hope that someday you\'ll forgive,
And find a way for us to live.
For though I stumbled on this road,
Fondness for you will never erode,\'
March 10th, 2023 05:01
\"Phantom of the Past\"
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so true. When I think of it, I think of my dead cousin. His life was cut so short. 15 years old. To young to die.
March 9th, 2023 08:27
Abby1234 said:
This poem is so true. When I think of it, I think of my dead cousin. His life was cut so short. 15 years old. To young to die.
March 9th, 2023 08:27
