Comments received on poems by ernie lawton



Family in the Flowers
NafisaSB said:

i liked the tenderness this poem evokes, and admire how you have entwined Nature with man. thanks for sharing

April 1st, 2023 01:12

Family in the Flowers
David Wakeling said:

This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no engagement for the reader. I liked the rhyme

March 31st, 2023 16:11