Comments received on poems by ernie lawton
Family in the Flowers
NafisaSB said:
i liked the tenderness this poem evokes, and admire how you have entwined Nature with man. thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2023 01:12
NafisaSB said:
i liked the tenderness this poem evokes, and admire how you have entwined Nature with man. thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2023 01:12
Family in the Flowers
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no engagement for the reader. I liked the rhyme
March 31st, 2023 16:11
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no engagement for the reader. I liked the rhyme
March 31st, 2023 16:11
