Comments received on poems by brooklyn6timesplus
Everyone Needs To Wake Up
Naranjita32 said:
I fee your words of lyrical expression. It's awesome how the minds think alike. Please keep giving us your innermost thoughts and feelings.
November 18th, 2015 15:15
Naranjita32 said:
I fee your words of lyrical expression. It's awesome how the minds think alike. Please keep giving us your innermost thoughts and feelings.
November 18th, 2015 15:15
Can You Just Get One More Chance To Embrace Her?
julia said:
I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!
November 16th, 2015 17:53
julia said:
I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!
November 16th, 2015 17:53
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