Comments received on poems by brooklyn6timesplus

The Opportunist Seeks It
josephjones1989 said:

Preach.... Awesome poem!

April 24th, 2016 20:10

Continue To Inspire
Sophie said:

A poem that is a bright spark on its own. A pleasure to read.

April 19th, 2016 18:59

Girl, Why Waste Your Time
monipoeta29 said:

This is pretty cool I like the fact that you acknowledge what men put us through .

April 15th, 2016 19:52

Words Only Mean So Much
StuckInSweetSurrender said:

I can definitely feel this. I write poems in a similar manner, but in a longer fashion. Going to check out more of your work. :)

April 8th, 2016 23:58

Always Challenge Yourself

I like the poem; short, poetic and informative.. kudos

April 7th, 2016 14:44

Find The Beauty In Everything

Thanks for sharing Brooklyn - a very uplifting poem. "Everything is beautiful in it's own away" and we need to see "Beauty in Everything". Please chck my poems - Thanks BRIAN

April 1st, 2016 15:15

Sentimental She Is
Severus Alexander said:


I feel for her.

I shed no tear for the fool.

Love is not something that you mess with.

Love is not a gift~

For god's sake, It's not a toy.

Too many people take it for granted.

It's a perilous path.

It's also, and this is what most people never get, a one-way path.

A path that changes not only you, but whomever else is involved.

It's a system of balance and counterbalance within a group.


You can't think of it from your own perspective, or it will end up being about you.

It's really not.

Love is about other people.

It is primarily a system of biochemical compulsion, designed to encourage biological organisms to multiply.

The conception of love as an abstract constant is, quite frankly, ludicrous.

It's an ever-changing, very physical thing, and no living thing is wholly exempt from it.

People need to accept the truth;

There are more things within the heart than can be conceived of by the mind.

March 25th, 2016 20:28

Sad Words (Belgium)

HI BROOKLYN - The recent attacks on innocent people in Paris & Brussels by ISIS gives out two (or more) messages to all of us. Firstly ISIS has no respect for people or place - we re all potential victims. Secondly these indiscriminate attacks are intended to create fear and uncertainty in Governments and the whole population. Thanks for caring and sharing - Please pray for Belgium at this sad time. BRIAN

March 23rd, 2016 13:56

She Sadly Goes Away
suzzy3 said:

She sounds lucky to get away. a new life waits for her.

March 12th, 2016 14:19

The Teacher Is There
Mastodonna said:

This really good

March 9th, 2016 12:16

It Is All In The Mind
emily_colman said:

very true:)

March 5th, 2016 21:01

The Answer Is There Within
Mike carter said:

An inspired write well done

February 19th, 2016 11:48

Girl, There Is Nothing But A Dark Road
Benson said:

Nature will rise against you!

February 11th, 2016 14:51

Times Can Be Stressful
drgnchaser said:

love this poem, great read, lets see some more

January 31st, 2016 03:26

Time Will Always Pass On
fclarke13 said:

Beautiful x

January 29th, 2016 11:14

She Cannot Go On
Kittenlover10 said:

This happened to me but I will go on...

January 14th, 2016 15:04

Sitting In The Comfort Of Her Chair
vpalexander said:

I would like to wipe her brow...a cool cloth never can never tell...what they cannot say. I failed to provide this simple comfort and it haunts me...we itch everywhere, and die silently.

January 7th, 2016 20:17

Consider Her Gone
Ken said:

When trust is lost, love truly suffers. Good job.

December 23rd, 2015 18:27

Staying Humble
Ken said:

Somehow I manage to find peace in your works. Great job.

December 22nd, 2015 22:42

Of A Soothing Nature
Ken said:

A mother's love never dies. Good job!

December 22nd, 2015 01:57

There Is Nothing But A Rough Road
Ken said:

Very well said!

December 20th, 2015 20:15

The Heart That Never Stopped Caring
clareb said:

Lovely images

December 18th, 2015 19:44

With Every New Day
De-nyce_A said:


December 16th, 2015 14:49

With Each New Day
Yorke said:

Such a beautiful message, very well expressed !

November 22nd, 2015 17:42

Find Courage And Strength
julesclark71 said:

wow thats good and very true

November 21st, 2015 10:55

Continue To Grow
julesclark71 said:

yes amen love it
thanks for sharing

November 21st, 2015 10:51

Everyone Needs To Wake Up
Naranjita32 said:

I fee your words of lyrical expression. It's awesome how the minds think alike. Please keep giving us your innermost thoughts and feelings.

November 18th, 2015 15:15

Can You Just Get One More Chance To Embrace Her?
julia said:

I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!

November 16th, 2015 17:53

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