Comments received on poems by brooklyn6timesplus
Continue To Inspire
Sophie said:
A poem that is a bright spark on its own. A pleasure to read.
April 19th, 2016 18:59
Sophie said:
A poem that is a bright spark on its own. A pleasure to read.
April 19th, 2016 18:59
Girl, Why Waste Your Time
monipoeta29 said:
This is pretty cool I like the fact that you acknowledge what men put us through .
April 15th, 2016 19:52
monipoeta29 said:
This is pretty cool I like the fact that you acknowledge what men put us through .
April 15th, 2016 19:52
Words Only Mean So Much
StuckInSweetSurrender said:
I can definitely feel this. I write poems in a similar manner, but in a longer fashion. Going to check out more of your work. :)
April 8th, 2016 23:58
StuckInSweetSurrender said:
I can definitely feel this. I write poems in a similar manner, but in a longer fashion. Going to check out more of your work. :)
April 8th, 2016 23:58
Always Challenge Yourself
EL-ADRAFAT said:
I like the poem; short, poetic and informative.. kudos
April 7th, 2016 14:44
EL-ADRAFAT said:
I like the poem; short, poetic and informative.. kudos
April 7th, 2016 14:44
Find The Beauty In Everything
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing Brooklyn - a very uplifting poem. "Everything is beautiful in it's own away" and we need to see "Beauty in Everything". Please chck my poems - Thanks BRIAN
April 1st, 2016 15:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing Brooklyn - a very uplifting poem. "Everything is beautiful in it's own away" and we need to see "Beauty in Everything". Please chck my poems - Thanks BRIAN
April 1st, 2016 15:15
Sentimental She Is
Severus Alexander said:
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I feel for her.
I shed no tear for the fool.
Love is not something that you mess with.
Love is not a gift~
For god's sake, It's not a toy.
Too many people take it for granted.
It's a perilous path.
It's also, and this is what most people never get, a one-way path.
A path that changes not only you, but whomever else is involved.
It's a system of balance and counterbalance within a group.
A GROUP.
You can't think of it from your own perspective, or it will end up being about you.
It's really not.
Love is about other people.
It is primarily a system of biochemical compulsion, designed to encourage biological organisms to multiply.
The conception of love as an abstract constant is, quite frankly, ludicrous.
It's an ever-changing, very physical thing, and no living thing is wholly exempt from it.
People need to accept the truth;
There are more things within the heart than can be conceived of by the mind.
March 25th, 2016 20:28
Severus Alexander said:
...
I feel for her.
I shed no tear for the fool.
Love is not something that you mess with.
Love is not a gift~
For god's sake, It's not a toy.
Too many people take it for granted.
It's a perilous path.
It's also, and this is what most people never get, a one-way path.
A path that changes not only you, but whomever else is involved.
It's a system of balance and counterbalance within a group.
A GROUP.
You can't think of it from your own perspective, or it will end up being about you.
It's really not.
Love is about other people.
It is primarily a system of biochemical compulsion, designed to encourage biological organisms to multiply.
The conception of love as an abstract constant is, quite frankly, ludicrous.
It's an ever-changing, very physical thing, and no living thing is wholly exempt from it.
People need to accept the truth;
There are more things within the heart than can be conceived of by the mind.
March 25th, 2016 20:28
Sad Words (Belgium)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BROOKLYN - The recent attacks on innocent people in Paris & Brussels by ISIS gives out two (or more) messages to all of us. Firstly ISIS has no respect for people or place - we re all potential victims. Secondly these indiscriminate attacks are intended to create fear and uncertainty in Governments and the whole population. Thanks for caring and sharing - Please pray for Belgium at this sad time. BRIAN
March 23rd, 2016 13:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BROOKLYN - The recent attacks on innocent people in Paris & Brussels by ISIS gives out two (or more) messages to all of us. Firstly ISIS has no respect for people or place - we re all potential victims. Secondly these indiscriminate attacks are intended to create fear and uncertainty in Governments and the whole population. Thanks for caring and sharing - Please pray for Belgium at this sad time. BRIAN
March 23rd, 2016 13:56
She Sadly Goes Away
suzzy3 said:
She sounds lucky to get away. a new life waits for her.
March 12th, 2016 14:19
suzzy3 said:
She sounds lucky to get away. a new life waits for her.
March 12th, 2016 14:19
The Answer Is There Within
Mike carter said:
An inspired write well done
Mike
February 19th, 2016 11:48
Mike carter said:
An inspired write well done
Mike
February 19th, 2016 11:48
Girl, There Is Nothing But A Dark Road
Benson said:
Nature will rise against you!
February 11th, 2016 14:51
Benson said:
Nature will rise against you!
February 11th, 2016 14:51
Times Can Be Stressful
drgnchaser said:
love this poem, great read, lets see some more
January 31st, 2016 03:26
drgnchaser said:
love this poem, great read, lets see some more
January 31st, 2016 03:26
She Cannot Go On
Kittenlover10 said:
This happened to me but I will go on...
January 14th, 2016 15:04
Kittenlover10 said:
This happened to me but I will go on...
January 14th, 2016 15:04
Sitting In The Comfort Of Her Chair
vpalexander said:
I would like to wipe her brow...a cool cloth never fails...you can never tell...what they cannot say. I failed to provide this simple comfort and it haunts me...we itch everywhere, and die silently.
January 7th, 2016 20:17
vpalexander said:
I would like to wipe her brow...a cool cloth never fails...you can never tell...what they cannot say. I failed to provide this simple comfort and it haunts me...we itch everywhere, and die silently.
January 7th, 2016 20:17
Consider Her Gone
Ken said:
When trust is lost, love truly suffers. Good job.
December 23rd, 2015 18:27
Ken said:
When trust is lost, love truly suffers. Good job.
December 23rd, 2015 18:27
Staying Humble
Ken said:
Somehow I manage to find peace in your works. Great job.
December 22nd, 2015 22:42
Ken said:
Somehow I manage to find peace in your works. Great job.
December 22nd, 2015 22:42
With Each New Day
Yorke said:
Such a beautiful message, very well expressed !
November 22nd, 2015 17:42
Yorke said:
Such a beautiful message, very well expressed !
November 22nd, 2015 17:42
Everyone Needs To Wake Up
Naranjita32 said:
I fee your words of lyrical expression. It's awesome how the minds think alike. Please keep giving us your innermost thoughts and feelings.
November 18th, 2015 15:15
Naranjita32 said:
I fee your words of lyrical expression. It's awesome how the minds think alike. Please keep giving us your innermost thoughts and feelings.
November 18th, 2015 15:15
Can You Just Get One More Chance To Embrace Her?
julia said:
I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!
November 16th, 2015 17:53
julia said:
I really like this, my interpretation of your poems makes me feel like the poem is a little dark and the lack of punctuation makes me think that the pain of the person the persona is talking to is never-ending because there are no boundaries to stop the pain running off the page. Then the capital letters, is light a way for the person to adjust and change their life within that poem, like they are starting afresh with a new line and a new sentence. it was short, yet meaningful!
November 16th, 2015 17:53
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