Comments received on poems by brandiem88
She Is Me
charles69 said:
I read your poem several times and enjoyed each reading. I like the way you are assertive and that you are controlled by no one but God and the Savior. Don\'t make the mistake of denying good inluences also. I think you have a bright fiture as a poet and writer. Glad to see that you have transcended many of your problems.
Have you written any gospel, sacred poems ? I bet you could write a fine poem expressing love for the Father and the Son.
If I can be of any help or support I will gladly try.
March 17th, 2023 21:39
charles69 said:
I read your poem several times and enjoyed each reading. I like the way you are assertive and that you are controlled by no one but God and the Savior. Don\'t make the mistake of denying good inluences also. I think you have a bright fiture as a poet and writer. Glad to see that you have transcended many of your problems.
Have you written any gospel, sacred poems ? I bet you could write a fine poem expressing love for the Father and the Son.
If I can be of any help or support I will gladly try.
March 17th, 2023 21:39