Comments received on poems by Shaakir
Autumn Renewal
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting Haiku. Nature and life intertwined. To rise against all obstacles and the re-birth of natural things. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 13:05
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting Haiku. Nature and life intertwined. To rise against all obstacles and the re-birth of natural things. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 13:05
Love, a Distraction
Doggerel Dave said:
It is a well constructed poem which happens to be quite meaningful.
Now I must tell you that I\'m usually an old grouch when it comes to love poetry. And you would have got away with this one if you had not asked for feedback. but you did and so:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It is an interactive site and works best when poets read and comment on other\'s work and also respond to comments on their own.
March 24th, 2023 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
It is a well constructed poem which happens to be quite meaningful.
Now I must tell you that I\'m usually an old grouch when it comes to love poetry. And you would have got away with this one if you had not asked for feedback. but you did and so:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
I hope you enjoy your stay at MPS. It is an interactive site and works best when poets read and comment on other\'s work and also respond to comments on their own.
March 24th, 2023 00:30
