Comments received on poems by Eclisse
Failing to die is not succeeding to live, and vice versa.
Doggerel Dave said:
I know it is extremely late now as you seem to have found your own way, and a very interesting way it is too - which is why I am here now.
The advice I sometimes provide at this point is \'Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to other’s work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.\'
But you seem to be enjoying it anyway....
March 31st, 2024 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I know it is extremely late now as you seem to have found your own way, and a very interesting way it is too - which is why I am here now.
The advice I sometimes provide at this point is \'Enjoy your stay at MPS. An interactive site, it works best when poets respond to other’s work and reply to commentary on their own poetry.\'
But you seem to be enjoying it anyway....
March 31st, 2024 17:31
Real Talk
Doggerel Dave said:
This should have started a serious debate here. Did no one care or just lack the courage?....... That could be it - as you so rightly point out.
Good for you.
March 31st, 2024 17:16
Doggerel Dave said:
This should have started a serious debate here. Did no one care or just lack the courage?....... That could be it - as you so rightly point out.
Good for you.
March 31st, 2024 17:16
Inevitable collisions
L. B. Mek said:
rich with vivid imagery
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
rich with vivid imagery
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2023 04:05
Inevitable collisions
Bobby O said:
Such a vibrant style. It’s a brave style. I’m stuck in the safer phrase but am a bit thrilled when somebody pulls it off , and a bit envious Nice write good read
June 8th, 2023 22:46
Bobby O said:
Such a vibrant style. It’s a brave style. I’m stuck in the safer phrase but am a bit thrilled when somebody pulls it off , and a bit envious Nice write good read
June 8th, 2023 22:46
Popping Silence
lonelydove said:
I love this. It really got me envisioning a world of silence.
April 24th, 2023 10:38
lonelydove said:
I love this. It really got me envisioning a world of silence.
April 24th, 2023 10:38
Popping Silence
L. B. Mek said:
this is my fourth, consecutively
memorable
read of yours, dear Poet
since and including \'I\'m broken\'
in which time you\'ve showcased
great range
wonderful flow and subtle pacing
as well as a genuinely interactive poetic voice
raging and edgy, in one
wise
self contained in another
and everything else in-between;
it will be a poetic delight
to follow your progress
for as long
as you choose to share with us
thank you!
April 24th, 2023 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
this is my fourth, consecutively
memorable
read of yours, dear Poet
since and including \'I\'m broken\'
in which time you\'ve showcased
great range
wonderful flow and subtle pacing
as well as a genuinely interactive poetic voice
raging and edgy, in one
wise
self contained in another
and everything else in-between;
it will be a poetic delight
to follow your progress
for as long
as you choose to share with us
thank you!
April 24th, 2023 06:53
An unsuspecting woman and silent dew drops
L. B. Mek said:
this is such a showcasing
of your practised inking skills, dear Poet
\'Hopping on one foot, working her shoe back on, as she gets down the hallway.
She takes a brief moment to catch her breath, and her thoughts,\'
wonderful characterisation
April 24th, 2023 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
this is such a showcasing
of your practised inking skills, dear Poet
\'Hopping on one foot, working her shoe back on, as she gets down the hallway.
She takes a brief moment to catch her breath, and her thoughts,\'
wonderful characterisation
April 24th, 2023 06:47
I\'m brOKen
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful poem! I like the rhyming infused with wisdom and strength.
April 22nd, 2023 06:53
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful poem! I like the rhyming infused with wisdom and strength.
April 22nd, 2023 06:53
I\'m brOKen
L. B. Mek said:
such a young poetic voice
yet wise enough to realise
equality, begins
when actioning our ideal
in that most subtle of ways
like \'black before, white\'
a sentence
to showcase that equal status
of poignant choice
undo, with one keyboard stroke
history\'s
systemic, warping intensions...
\'Not everything is all black and white.\'
indeed!!!
(I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet)
thank you!
April 21st, 2023 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
such a young poetic voice
yet wise enough to realise
equality, begins
when actioning our ideal
in that most subtle of ways
like \'black before, white\'
a sentence
to showcase that equal status
of poignant choice
undo, with one keyboard stroke
history\'s
systemic, warping intensions...
\'Not everything is all black and white.\'
indeed!!!
(I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet)
thank you!
April 21st, 2023 06:35
Find me, only to lose me again, would you please?
jynxorcism said:
Heartstrings played to this saddened tune...
April 20th, 2023 23:31
jynxorcism said:
Heartstrings played to this saddened tune...
April 20th, 2023 23:31
Hitched thoughts, caught in bleeding throats
jynxorcism said:
Brilliant.....one of the better poems on this topic I\'ve ever read
April 20th, 2023 23:25
jynxorcism said:
Brilliant.....one of the better poems on this topic I\'ve ever read
April 20th, 2023 23:25
Aces and spaces of hatters with tea platters
Bobby O said:
The White Rabbit of course. Here’s an interesting Jazzy version that’s fun
https://youtu.be/gaZJKjQIBEw
April 18th, 2023 20:39
Bobby O said:
The White Rabbit of course. Here’s an interesting Jazzy version that’s fun
https://youtu.be/gaZJKjQIBEw
April 18th, 2023 20:39
My Candy Shop
Bobby O said:
You sold me and built anticipation. Dialing now though risky entanglement seems likely. I’ll change names to protect the innocent but I may refer to a poetess as questionable influence ?
April 15th, 2023 08:08
Bobby O said:
You sold me and built anticipation. Dialing now though risky entanglement seems likely. I’ll change names to protect the innocent but I may refer to a poetess as questionable influence ?
April 15th, 2023 08:08
Hush
L. B. Mek said:
what a great read, loved your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2023 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
what a great read, loved your poetic ambition
thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2023 03:51
My Candy Shop
Lorna said:
I absolutely have to get something sweet right now and I get that this isn\'t about candy but the descriptions are mouthwatering.... Love this..... another good one
April 12th, 2023 05:08
Lorna said:
I absolutely have to get something sweet right now and I get that this isn\'t about candy but the descriptions are mouthwatering.... Love this..... another good one
April 12th, 2023 05:08
My Candy Shop
Neville said:
you have a compelling pen ma\'am .. your mouth as above is both fitting and likewise fine .. Oh\' and a somewhat belated welcome to MPS .. I Hope you will be comfortable here ... Neville
April 12th, 2023 02:55
Neville said:
you have a compelling pen ma\'am .. your mouth as above is both fitting and likewise fine .. Oh\' and a somewhat belated welcome to MPS .. I Hope you will be comfortable here ... Neville
April 12th, 2023 02:55
Our minds are burning trees, and thoughts the ashen leaves
Bobby O said:
Eyes narrowed
Nice to indicate w strong prose and to create that powerful visual.
April 10th, 2023 19:47
Bobby O said:
Eyes narrowed
Nice to indicate w strong prose and to create that powerful visual.
April 10th, 2023 19:47
Write Away The Pain
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially can see the graveyard at dawn.... it\'s beautiful image..........
April 8th, 2023 04:41
Lorna said:
Loved this and especially can see the graveyard at dawn.... it\'s beautiful image..........
April 8th, 2023 04:41
Write Away The Pain
orchidee said:
Yes, it helps, I\'m sure. We\'ve written it down, got it out of our minds, as it were, even if it\'s not gone away completely instantly.
April 8th, 2023 02:29
orchidee said:
Yes, it helps, I\'m sure. We\'ve written it down, got it out of our minds, as it were, even if it\'s not gone away completely instantly.
April 8th, 2023 02:29
Demons begging for lustful intoxication
orchidee said:
Oohh, i can\'t have too much \'excitement\' like this in me sheltered life! lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:41
orchidee said:
Oohh, i can\'t have too much \'excitement\' like this in me sheltered life! lol.
April 6th, 2023 07:41
