Words that define
orchidee said:

Good write S.

July 4th, 2023 02:06

Adapt
Bobby O said:

The last line is a worthy culmination of all that is above - Don’t Change
ADAPT!

April 18th, 2023 16:46

What Lies Inside
David Wakeling said:

I read this twice but there are too many big words.I didn\'t understand any of it.

April 1st, 2023 20:40

The Thing That Dies
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(I laud how much dedicated skill went into this
most impassioned, poignant poem
the hours of edits it took to unbalance
your eloquence
keeping your delivery off-beat, on purpose
so as to invoke a sense of dissonance
in order for the reader to relate, to the nuanced
stunted scream of enraged defeat
these words portray,
is executed with such practised skill..)
such a powerful way for me
to be introducing to your Art
you have a most unique and brilliantly brave, poetic voice
I feel I may be a mere Icarus, of a wannabe poet
to your
poetic metaphor\'s, majestic \'Hope\'
still
I may know little, but I know enough
to bow to your superior talent, dear Poet
thank you for choosing to share
stay strong!

March 27th, 2023 04:01