Comments received on poems by Jan_Yin



~That girl is me~
nabi5 said:

this poem spoke to my soul, thank you for your beautiful words

May 25th, 2023 14:43

~That girl is me~
Anouk said:

I really like it !!

May 25th, 2023 04:57

Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing ))

May 10th, 2023 14:47

Love
2781 said:

There\'s a very lucky man? Somewhere?

May 4th, 2023 07:27

~horror is the removal of masks~
Bobby O said:

Filling in fantasy as reality maybe isn’t doom each time , but your real experience metaphorically introduced touched me. I liked it. Nice v

April 18th, 2023 20:45

~Using makeup shouldn\'t hide who you are meant to be , it supposed to express who you are, what you want you want others to see~
L. B. Mek said:

that\'s a wise mic you\'ve got
(mic drop joke)
lol
thanks for sharing
\'indeed
aesthetic, is a hollow crown
to anchor your worth upon...\'
(I meant that universal \'you\')

April 17th, 2023 04:09



Envy
Anaisabel89 said:

I really like the way you’ve written this. And a very satisfying end.

March 29th, 2023 08:12

Envy
2781 said:

I think murder is not good!

March 29th, 2023 05:23