Comments received on poems by Carl Halling



Dispatches from the Trenches of Despair
Goldfinch60 said:

May that peace grow within you Carl, you have had the experience of worse times and with that experience you now have the ability to move forward in peace and love.

Andy

May 4th, 2021 00:16

All the Rivers of Tears
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words . Nicely expressed

May 3rd, 2021 11:54

Ain\'t It Sad How Things Turn Out To Be
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

It is sad when things turn out differently , not in the way want them too . It’s sad when pain comes our way .,, because it makes life feel empty and confusing .

May 3rd, 2021 11:53

In Remembrance of My Lost Angel
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

January 27th, 2017 09:17

In Remembrance of My Lost Angel
Fay Slimm. said:

The sadness wrapped in the words touches the heart Carl - - loss of this kind makes for a song that always lives on. A haunt of a read. Thank you for sharing it.

January 27th, 2017 04:03

In a Forgotten Field in England
Augustus said:

Interesting life of what I think is anti- hero as he never was really successful at anything and died young. Is this young man now considered a hero, perhaps representing rebellion of the young against the judeo-Christian work ethic? Nicely done.

November 20th, 2016 11:40

All the Rivers of Tears
JaimiKendallJones said:

Beautiful indeed. I enjoyed this. Short and poignant.

December 29th, 2015 14:36

Toilers of the Sea
Rooster said:

I read the poem before even looking at the comments on it and was ready to say what a melodic vibe it had and would make a good song. Would like to hear it in its lyrical form.

December 17th, 2015 01:20

Some Perverse Will
Rooster said:

I can relate to the feeling expressed in your poem. Thank you

December 14th, 2015 09:51

The Wanderer of Golders Green
sonnetelectric7413 said:

U are so very clever with your writing I love it

December 1st, 2015 07:08

To See You at Every Time of Day
sonnetelectric7413 said:

What a beautiful lyric and beautiful song

December 1st, 2015 07:05

Wicked Cahoots
Softwhisper said:

I love this. It reminds me of a lad I knew who told me he would take a razor blade to anyone who bullied me if I liked. I was shocked and told him no that was ok . . . His was a very sweet heart in a very tough world.

November 21st, 2015 13:03

Your Beautiful (Lethal) Life
Naranjita32 said:

Love every word of your poetic expression. Keep giving us your innermost thought and feelings.

November 18th, 2015 15:05