Comments received on poems by Real Rhyme
Whispers of temptations
2781 said:
There is a way to break the need,
And it sprouts from the smallest seed.
October 22nd, 2023 08:04
2781 said:
There is a way to break the need,
And it sprouts from the smallest seed.
October 22nd, 2023 08:04
Whispers of temptations
Thomas W Case said:
They almost ruined my life. Great poem.
October 22nd, 2023 07:43
Thomas W Case said:
They almost ruined my life. Great poem.
October 22nd, 2023 07:43
Earthly Poem
Pop64 said:
I fell into the depths of this write, completely. It speaks of and resonates the truths factually. Lovely!!
September 5th, 2023 09:43
Pop64 said:
I fell into the depths of this write, completely. It speaks of and resonates the truths factually. Lovely!!
September 5th, 2023 09:43
Harsh Reality Of Phone
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully witty, and relatable
thanks for sharing
(I read a book recently
where the character only had one charger in his flat
and it was purposely placed in the kitchen
every night he would charge his phone
insuring he wouldn\'t be tempted to take his phone to bed
and stay up scrolling all night long
lol
the things we\'re forced to do, to counter
progression\'s, vices...)
March 31st, 2023 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully witty, and relatable
thanks for sharing
(I read a book recently
where the character only had one charger in his flat
and it was purposely placed in the kitchen
every night he would charge his phone
insuring he wouldn\'t be tempted to take his phone to bed
and stay up scrolling all night long
lol
the things we\'re forced to do, to counter
progression\'s, vices...)
March 31st, 2023 04:07
Harsh Reality Of Phone
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t own a smart phone, (too ancient to be caught up in all that) but from observation of others, I\'d say you may well be on the money.
Also found your \"About Me\' on your home page amusing. However could you add your location you\'d be surprised how knowing this can help in understanding what you mean sometimes.
Anyway , enjoy your stay at MPS - it is an interactive site and works best when poets read other\'s work and comment, also respond to commentary on their own work.
March 30th, 2023 20:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t own a smart phone, (too ancient to be caught up in all that) but from observation of others, I\'d say you may well be on the money.
Also found your \"About Me\' on your home page amusing. However could you add your location you\'d be surprised how knowing this can help in understanding what you mean sometimes.
Anyway , enjoy your stay at MPS - it is an interactive site and works best when poets read other\'s work and comment, also respond to commentary on their own work.
March 30th, 2023 20:23
