Comments received on poems by Real Rhyme



Mother\'s love
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written poem of a mother\'s love, enjoyed the read

March 24th, 2025 03:22

Mother\'s love
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of maternal love. Well spoken

March 23rd, 2025 17:25

Big Friendly Giant (BFG)
Poetic Licence said:

An entertaining read that woke up the memory bank, enjoyed the read

March 22nd, 2025 06:34

Big Friendly Giant (BFG)
sorenbarrett said:

Reminds me of Shrek but could be Andre the Giant in The princess bride. A fun read

March 22nd, 2025 05:44

I want to...
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of wanting to break free from the modern world and live a simpler life, enjoyed the read

March 21st, 2025 08:41

I want to...
sorenbarrett said:

There is a longing in this poem a feel for the more simple life. I live such a life and can tell you it is peaceful. A lovely write

March 21st, 2025 06:39

Whispers of temptations
2781 said:

There is a way to break the need,
And it sprouts from the smallest seed.

October 22nd, 2023 08:04

Whispers of temptations
Thomas W Case said:

They almost ruined my life. Great poem.

October 22nd, 2023 07:43

Earthly Poem
vividvoid14 said:

pop64 took the words right out my mouth

September 5th, 2023 15:41

Earthly Poem
Pop64 said:

I fell into the depths of this write, completely. It speaks of and resonates the truths factually. Lovely!!

September 5th, 2023 09:43

Harsh Reality Of Phone
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully witty, and relatable
thanks for sharing
(I read a book recently
where the character only had one charger in his flat
and it was purposely placed in the kitchen
every night he would charge his phone
insuring he wouldn\'t be tempted to take his phone to bed
and stay up scrolling all night long
lol
the things we\'re forced to do, to counter
progression\'s, vices...)

March 31st, 2023 04:07

Harsh Reality Of Phone
Doggerel Dave said:

I don\'t own a smart phone, (too ancient to be caught up in all that) but from observation of others, I\'d say you may well be on the money.

Also found your \"About Me\' on your home page amusing. However could you add your location you\'d be surprised how knowing this can help in understanding what you mean sometimes.

Anyway , enjoy your stay at MPS - it is an interactive site and works best when poets read other\'s work and comment, also respond to commentary on their own work.

March 30th, 2023 20:23