Comments received on poems by sonnetelectric7413
Quite Voices
Yorke said:
I do enjoy your writing, brilliant ideas, you connect directly with the reader with such raw feeling!
December 4th, 2015 09:52
Yorke said:
I do enjoy your writing, brilliant ideas, you connect directly with the reader with such raw feeling!
December 4th, 2015 09:52
My heart beats its depressing tune
sonnetelectric7413 said:
well yesterday I felt that way but im better it comes and goes a lot
December 1st, 2015 06:47
sonnetelectric7413 said:
well yesterday I felt that way but im better it comes and goes a lot
December 1st, 2015 06:47
My heart beats its depressing tune
Yorke said:
Sad thoughts indeed, I do hope this is written from an imagined perspective rather than a personal one? Powerful words
November 30th, 2015 16:02
Yorke said:
Sad thoughts indeed, I do hope this is written from an imagined perspective rather than a personal one? Powerful words
November 30th, 2015 16:02
A sick conceited world
Yorke said:
It is how the world looks through the media, well said!
November 25th, 2015 13:12
Yorke said:
It is how the world looks through the media, well said!
November 25th, 2015 13:12
Invisable Poison
Softwhisper said:
A good idea to spell check before you post . . . its got some power in it, apart from glaring typo in the title and final line which suggests a childlike frame of mind. If that is a stylistic choice like using "u" instead of "you" I missed it.
November 21st, 2015 13:06
Softwhisper said:
A good idea to spell check before you post . . . its got some power in it, apart from glaring typo in the title and final line which suggests a childlike frame of mind. If that is a stylistic choice like using "u" instead of "you" I missed it.
November 21st, 2015 13:06
