Comments received on poems by melisa alpizar



\"Heart Filled With Sorrow\"
McKenzy said:

I really like your poem. It basically summons up my story


February 5th, 2016 23:54

\"Mom\"
drgnchaser said:

I haven't spoken to my mother in 17 years, and it can stay that way, I went through some shit. nice constructive was to put it out.

February 4th, 2016 16:44

\"Done\"
drgnchaser said:

conflicted anger with a hint of sadness.

February 4th, 2016 16:40

\"Even Though\"
drgnchaser said:

moving

February 4th, 2016 16:18

\"Wish Upon A Dream\"
drgnchaser said:

nice poem, i like it

February 4th, 2016 15:58

\"Done\"
Mike carter said:

vieled anger with a hint of sadness
really liked this

February 3rd, 2016 07:22

\"Even Though\"
Mike carter said:

very sad thoughtful reflection

February 3rd, 2016 07:21

\" He Has A KId!?\"
drgnchaser said:

I've been that guy, it sucked, nice work though

January 31st, 2016 04:47

\" He Has A KId!?\"
fclarke13 said:

Wow that's so true and so amazing x

January 29th, 2016 11:15

\"Even Though\"
grange_m said:

Very good and very moving

January 6th, 2016 01:04

\"Missing You\"
Ditzywriter said:

Beautifully written.

January 1st, 2016 12:05

\"Puzzle\"
grange_m said:

Hi Melisa,
Very good,is this a reflection of your own experience?
If it is, it must be heart breaking and very difficult.

November 28th, 2015 18:46

\"Time\"
justwrite said:

I like the repetitive nature of this poem, almost like a desperate plea to remind the one who takes time for granted.
nicely done!



November 26th, 2015 07:06

\"Time\"
cellardyke1 said:

I agree, so true you capture the point well.

November 25th, 2015 15:58

\"Time\"
grange_m said:

Yes I agree with your comments,live for the moment.

November 25th, 2015 00:34