The Dark Whisperer
Bobby O said:

Maybe change the sentence structure here and there and convey w suggestion instead of only direct prose really like the content and message.
ie; lips luscious whispering sweet
Selling dreams that soar and I’m captured by the heat as sultry soothing voice gladdens me and guides with promise through the dead of winter contrasting norm and delivering hope that astounds

There’s a million different ways that work and it’s better sometimes to avoid common cadence. Or ignore me cuz I might not know nothing ? Something yo think about and play with ??

April 10th, 2023 20:08