Comments received on poems by mrsbrown
My Walk of Stardom
L. B. Mek said:
such an accurate unfurling
of purposed, social commentary
an important and timely write
thank you!
(price of fame
in a modernity, where twitch stardom
rivals, Hollywood\'s legacy
of sucking talent dry and then asking
for more
now, bathroom\'s breaks are scenes
and emotionality, a prerequisite
to donation begging, tearful antics
and by age 22
they\'re all, \'has-beens\'
devoid of self worth, but it\'s ok
cos they got millions in the bank
oh wait
here comes another millionaires
suicide note...
and on, the show must go on
humanity\'s collective, herd idiocy
must be entertained, and kept
sugar HIGH
in a frazzled, reactionary state
so that franc rage
mass murderous revolution, debacle
doesn\'t repeat
too, soon...)
April 24th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
such an accurate unfurling
of purposed, social commentary
an important and timely write
thank you!
(price of fame
in a modernity, where twitch stardom
rivals, Hollywood\'s legacy
of sucking talent dry and then asking
for more
now, bathroom\'s breaks are scenes
and emotionality, a prerequisite
to donation begging, tearful antics
and by age 22
they\'re all, \'has-beens\'
devoid of self worth, but it\'s ok
cos they got millions in the bank
oh wait
here comes another millionaires
suicide note...
and on, the show must go on
humanity\'s collective, herd idiocy
must be entertained, and kept
sugar HIGH
in a frazzled, reactionary state
so that franc rage
mass murderous revolution, debacle
doesn\'t repeat
too, soon...)
April 24th, 2023 05:14
My Walk of Stardom
Bobby O said:
That was really an impactful way to date a story. I felt it deep. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 17:04
Bobby O said:
That was really an impactful way to date a story. I felt it deep. Nice piece
April 23rd, 2023 17:04