Comments received on poems by lonelydove
Alone
Audrey A. said:
They couldn\'t see that you\'re drowning because they are further underwater than you. It looks like they\'re fine because there is no air in the hair.
April 25th, 2023 09:10
Audrey A. said:
They couldn\'t see that you\'re drowning because they are further underwater than you. It looks like they\'re fine because there is no air in the hair.
April 25th, 2023 09:10
Happiness
MendedFences27 said:
There are many forms of happiness. Some are small slice of the larger pie. The greatest of all is love, You may find a degree of happiness in your studies or your writing. Maybe among friends. Eventually, love will come to you. And when it does all things will seem better. Keep on writing. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 17:31
MendedFences27 said:
There are many forms of happiness. Some are small slice of the larger pie. The greatest of all is love, You may find a degree of happiness in your studies or your writing. Maybe among friends. Eventually, love will come to you. And when it does all things will seem better. Keep on writing. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 17:31
Happiness
Audrey A. said:
I found happiness by making one less thing more hurt less each day. After peeling back so much pain and allowing the sadness flow out, happiness started shining through.
April 24th, 2023 14:42
Audrey A. said:
I found happiness by making one less thing more hurt less each day. After peeling back so much pain and allowing the sadness flow out, happiness started shining through.
April 24th, 2023 14:42
