Comments received on poems by finalhero
Love=sand
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You described a type of love well! We can give it freely, but oh I hope you're wrong that we cannot ever retain it....perhaps the trying kills it? I loved your use of end-rhyming.
December 2nd, 2010 15:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You described a type of love well! We can give it freely, but oh I hope you're wrong that we cannot ever retain it....perhaps the trying kills it? I loved your use of end-rhyming.
December 2nd, 2010 15:51