Comments received on poems by Bella.26
Talk to me
L. B. Mek said:
(crazy, we feel shut-in
while staring at doors
all day..)
stay strong!
if it get\'s too much, then just bail
life is too short, to fight alone
in a sinking ship, save yourself
deal with any guilt later
be the monster, just keep that
heart
from being shattered, again n again
as, it\'s the only one
you\'ll ever get, dear poet
treasure it, treasure yourself
May 12th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
(crazy, we feel shut-in
while staring at doors
all day..)
stay strong!
if it get\'s too much, then just bail
life is too short, to fight alone
in a sinking ship, save yourself
deal with any guilt later
be the monster, just keep that
heart
from being shattered, again n again
as, it\'s the only one
you\'ll ever get, dear poet
treasure it, treasure yourself
May 12th, 2023 04:20
How you make me feel
L. B. Mek said:
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my feeble attempt
at a poetic reply:
(romance\'s wings are so furtive
and frail
yet, as long as our confessions
remain
in our heart\'s furnace walls, they
shine bright
so how can we dare to express
our feelings?
when we know, with one untimely
misunderstanding
those romance wings, will dissipate
into that nothingness
ache of solitude n rejection, we know
far, too well)
May 8th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
and inspiring my feeble attempt
at a poetic reply:
(romance\'s wings are so furtive
and frail
yet, as long as our confessions
remain
in our heart\'s furnace walls, they
shine bright
so how can we dare to express
our feelings?
when we know, with one untimely
misunderstanding
those romance wings, will dissipate
into that nothingness
ache of solitude n rejection, we know
far, too well)
May 8th, 2023 05:27
His House
Bobby O said:
Cheap shots are fiction that only serve to bolster selfish moments compensating for misplaced hubris that hides their fear and shame. False pride marks them , owns them, and gifts you w assurances and joy of a private smile.
May 6th, 2023 05:50
Bobby O said:
Cheap shots are fiction that only serve to bolster selfish moments compensating for misplaced hubris that hides their fear and shame. False pride marks them , owns them, and gifts you w assurances and joy of a private smile.
May 6th, 2023 05:50
When I break
Bobby O said:
Reasonable request and conveyed w believable honor. Nice. I liked it.
May 5th, 2023 20:36
Bobby O said:
Reasonable request and conveyed w believable honor. Nice. I liked it.
May 5th, 2023 20:36