Comments received on poems by Light
A Storybooks Tale
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just dirt, grass and flowers, a path but a shaky one,
I blink and the words stop spinning, they right themselves onto the page once more,
Worlds and people fade into memories, then nothing,\'
beautifully realised, great flow
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(oh and btw I loved Wall-E)
May 15th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just dirt, grass and flowers, a path but a shaky one,
I blink and the words stop spinning, they right themselves onto the page once more,
Worlds and people fade into memories, then nothing,\'
beautifully realised, great flow
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(oh and btw I loved Wall-E)
May 15th, 2023 04:14
A Subway Dance
Bobby O said:
The SAME breathes w comfort though that diverse path is camouflage secretly sure an indiscernible inch carved anew alters a javelin aimed at a heavenly star to miss by thousands of miles. Einstein honors that constant change
May 6th, 2023 20:43
Bobby O said:
The SAME breathes w comfort though that diverse path is camouflage secretly sure an indiscernible inch carved anew alters a javelin aimed at a heavenly star to miss by thousands of miles. Einstein honors that constant change
May 6th, 2023 20:43
