Comments received on poems by DamKb
Smaller than Wanted
Bobby O said:
Introspective reflection awakens a crowd in a measured way that tempts and prods, still remaining easy circumstance to set aside when influence falls short of contagion and silence said to be of accidental sort allows bold step to still. When status quo charges no tax , anonymity of the crowd likely steers my play. Less courageous than this author , and silent still, assuaged guilt may soften when a noted Kipling quote is proffered “ you’re a better man than I , Gunga Din. “ I offer props and note your bravery.
May 6th, 2023 10:15
Bobby O said:
Introspective reflection awakens a crowd in a measured way that tempts and prods, still remaining easy circumstance to set aside when influence falls short of contagion and silence said to be of accidental sort allows bold step to still. When status quo charges no tax , anonymity of the crowd likely steers my play. Less courageous than this author , and silent still, assuaged guilt may soften when a noted Kipling quote is proffered “ you’re a better man than I , Gunga Din. “ I offer props and note your bravery.
May 6th, 2023 10:15