Comments received on poems by sea12
Marionette and her Puppeteer
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
really well realised, thanks for sharing
the imagery and tone of immediacy
really help to elevate each other
some imagine the ground
eating them alive, just
so they can survive that moment
other\'s, like in your poem
entrust themselves to their, intuit
self
and hope they have enough, to survive
May 12th, 2023 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
really well realised, thanks for sharing
the imagery and tone of immediacy
really help to elevate each other
some imagine the ground
eating them alive, just
so they can survive that moment
other\'s, like in your poem
entrust themselves to their, intuit
self
and hope they have enough, to survive
May 12th, 2023 03:06