Comments received on poems by Nathan Tent
Mental Inner Peace
arqios said:
Yes, rhyme scheme being over, rhyming may thus arise more naturally. Welcome to MPS, Nate.
Rik.
May 12th, 2023 05:50
arqios said:
Yes, rhyme scheme being over, rhyming may thus arise more naturally. Welcome to MPS, Nate.
Rik.
May 12th, 2023 05:50
Mental Inner Peace
L. B. Mek said:
\'At the top, we feast
On this beast
Inner peace
It may just be deceased\'
so bleak
\'We can hang by a rope
Or we can have hope
You can try
And you can try
But you will still fail
And that alright
As long as you keep going
And find inner peace\'
so life-affirmingly positive
thanks for sharing, a great read
May 12th, 2023 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'At the top, we feast
On this beast
Inner peace
It may just be deceased\'
so bleak
\'We can hang by a rope
Or we can have hope
You can try
And you can try
But you will still fail
And that alright
As long as you keep going
And find inner peace\'
so life-affirmingly positive
thanks for sharing, a great read
May 12th, 2023 04:31
Mental Inner Peace
Bloodorange said:
We can hang by a rope or we can have hope , to me that was really deep I felt that .
May 12th, 2023 03:19
Bloodorange said:
We can hang by a rope or we can have hope , to me that was really deep I felt that .
May 12th, 2023 03:19