Comments received on poems by Vairabhiana
Undefined Power.
2781 said:
\"And I saw heaven opened, and behold a white horse;
May 25th, 2023 10:19
2781 said:
\"And I saw heaven opened, and behold a white horse;
May 25th, 2023 10:19
Prey of the Odds.
Bobby O said:
You had me until the last two lines All along I tried to stay w you as you paint the picture and describe the Forces
Or influences that disproportionately control and sway events to their advantage mostly from shadows w plausible deniability in tow. We are challenged to alter that course w power we gain from that unity but there is no other choice or alternative to leveraging that united power to effect meaningful CHANGE. None.,and thusly the conclusion reached in your second to last line is disparate , indefensible, and invalid. QED!
May 17th, 2023 19:38
Bobby O said:
You had me until the last two lines All along I tried to stay w you as you paint the picture and describe the Forces
Or influences that disproportionately control and sway events to their advantage mostly from shadows w plausible deniability in tow. We are challenged to alter that course w power we gain from that unity but there is no other choice or alternative to leveraging that united power to effect meaningful CHANGE. None.,and thusly the conclusion reached in your second to last line is disparate , indefensible, and invalid. QED!
May 17th, 2023 19:38
