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Life’s the Journey we all make
Soman Ragavan said:


My comments on the poem \"Life’s the journey we all make” by Ashok Sawhny
Very philosophical poem. It is true we can never beat life; we have to live it out. We have to leave our mark on this world and poets do it like no one else can. Poetry is immortal. Life is indeed a one-way street. There is no going back. Life has no eraser, no Backspace, no Delete buttons, no Undo, no Cancel. The end is the grave or the funeral pyre. Even the ashes will disappear with time. Only writings will remain.
“A book is the only immortality.” Quoted in : Sam Phillips : \"3000 proverbs.\" New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
Stumbling and falling are natural : we are meant to rise again and continue the struggle.
Night has also been made so we can see the stars that remain outshone by the sun.
A “pre-destined ride” : true, it has all been mapped out for us.
Soman Ragavan. 24 may, 2023. //
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May 24th, 2023 05:16

Life’s the Journey we all make
Saxon Crow said:

A very uplifting read AS. I enjoyed it immensely

May 24th, 2023 02:44